My friend Travis loves everything I write and he wants me to showcase it, so I've decided to. :3 Everything written here is original, and MINE. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE comment when you read! I hate seeing a crapload of views on it but no comments. :[ I want to be critiqued. They are written based upon my mood.
[o7/12] Poem
"Who You Are"
Mood: Content, but missing him.
I watch the stars.
I close my eyes and they become your arms.
The wind becomes your wit and charm.
I open my eyes and then it's gone.
I'm in my bed.
Thoughts of you roam about in my head.
Where your fingers traced and lead.
I open my eyes and then it's gone.
Your face, your skin and body.
They all are a part of me.
They all know how to make me happy
In the way that only they can.
Your voice, your hair and brown eyes.
You're different from any other guy.
You refuse to leave and when I ask you why...
You say, 'it's who I am.'
[o7/16] Song
"A Girl Like Me"
Mood: Overflowing with hope.
V1: I cry when I hear those songs about the girl that doesn't get the guy, and no matter how hard she should try, he doesn't know. Cause I used to be the one who always wrote your name but played this constant game of 'shyness.'
Pre-Chorus: The bold and the beautiful; the girl who does the best in school; the girl that's most outgoing... It seems to occur that without lifting a finger, she's the one who gets him.
Chorus: That's why I feel so lucky to have you. You're not swayed by the magazine cover girls, in diamonds and pearls. That's why I feel so happy you're with me. Others might cry alone but one day you see, they will find the guy like you that loved a girl like me.
V2: I don't like my friends to see me and my boyfriend cause I remember when I was single and even then, I felt miserable. Cause everyone wants somebody to love no matter how tough they seem, cause if they're anything at all like me, they won't let it show.
(Pre-Chorus)
(Chorus)
Bridge: That's why I feel so lucky to date you. You're not impressed by all those preppy girls, with their hair all done in curls. That's why I feel so happy when you're 'round me. I was the one that cried alone but you see, I found a guy like that to love a girl like me.
(Chorusx2)
[o8/14] Poem
"A Day To Die"
Mood: Depressed.
Today is the day I pray
I make it out alive
This life and it's lies
It's all so contrived
And if I should fail
This is my goodbye
Cause today is one hell of a day to die
[o8/18] Poem
"God"
Mood: Inspired.
On my hands and knees
I make a choice
It's in my heart
Out through my voice
It took so long
Just to see
That all you wanted
Was to love me
 Abstract S t a r · Sun Jul 12, 2009 @ 05:16am · 0 Comments |
