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Fireheart
Fireheart
500 black ops suronding the building Fireheart is in Fireheart looks around he see's 100 black ops in 1 side of the hall lined up and ready to kill he looks at the other side and see another 1oo lined up to kill

Fireheart - *smirks* this is gonna be fun

Fireheart qiuckly takes his jacket off you see Fireheart in a vest with his 2 demon fangs guns on his vest he looks at both sides then pulls out his demon fangs these guns are very speacial there made to use shadows as bullets and can never run out and even though they look like pistols they shoot faster then you think

black op - get READY

black op - SET

Fireheart - *still smirking*

black op - SHOOT

the black ops start shooting Fireheart doges every bullet passing him to kill instead the black op across the room then Fireheart shoots 2 bullets qiuck then those bullets go through 20 black ops then he turns and gains speed starts to run at the black ops then when hes at the end jumps over the black ops and keeps shooting them down

Fireheart - thats all you got

Fireheart runs down the seconed hall just keeps runing he takes out his shadow blades and slices everyone in his path just keeps going and going he see's a window runs to it and jumps as he is falling he crashes to the ground kneeling then gets up opens his eyes and see's helicopters , black ops, cops all of them pointing guns at him

Fireheart - *smileing* this is going to be fun

want more plz comment me and i will tell the rest hope u like it peace out and love ya heart






User Comments: [5]
Distant Starlite
Community Member





Fri Jul 31, 2009 @ 07:08pm


Okay so far the whole story is good but right now I'm not seeing a real plot. Maybe you should try making something that's not all violence. (Learned from years of experience, trust me you'll get more comments)


natasha-456
Community Member





Fri Jul 31, 2009 @ 11:27pm


im actually enjoyin it. i like it so far. just keep lettin me kno wen u put more on here.and da comment u got bout not havin much violence and not seein a real plot, well 2 me i love violence maybe u can put a little romance and more humor in it. but if its how u want it i think u should just keep writin ur way. keep it up. love ya!


L klips
Community Member





Sat Aug 01, 2009 @ 04:36am


lolz i like so far man


XoRejectedoX
Community Member





Sat Aug 01, 2009 @ 06:08am


Its really good babe,
love the storyline...
maybe ill do one myself...it mite suck so after ill stick to song writing
but mine might be about a girl and a guy..haha.

xxxx


DaddiesGurl1236
Community Member





Tue Aug 11, 2009 @ 11:06pm


So far i really like it!! smile


User Comments: [5]
 
 
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