How my character is percieved through other peoples eyes.
Zexion: She has potential, but has so far been no more than a handicap for the group. She has only just revealed the ability to use weapons, and she rarely uses her alchemic abilities to aid us. If she doesn't pick up the slack, she'll be a hindrance and we might as well leave her behind.
Mizu: Tad bit of a drama queen, but I think Maggie and Kyla have the most growing to do out of all of us, but unlike Kyla, Maggie has to do it on her own or she won't become as strong as she wants to be. Character Knowledge: OMG, Maggie is so much fun! I remember in the baths..
Byne: I...see her as the group's liability. Faint's semi often, doesn't have much of a strength save for her versitility because of her alchemy...I guess I'm just kinda meh about Maggie, sad to say.
Lavender Saura: Maggie - Player Very much ruled by her insecurities, but we all are to some degree. Yet even though this may hinder her sometimes, she tries her best to lift the spirits of everyone. I love having her in the RP, her upbeat attitude is really refreshing. I really want to see her use her Alchemy more, there's such potential behind it! Charac. Perspective/Relation I love Maggie to death, and I feel so bad that the group always seems to misplace her! o_o She really helped me in opening up to everyone through tiny things like offering me Elixers or just giving me hugs. I definitely want to get to know her more. XD
These are Critiques given, however I feel that being called a Mary sue is an offensive term.
SO LET'S START
7. Does your character have a great body/physique, which you describe, show, and/or illustrate?
Describe? Defianntly not, infact if anything I go out of my way too enhance my flaws and not PARADE them. I do not in anyway shape or form think that I'm a sex pot, i am humble and modest about my appearence and the way i draw shouldn't effect this. Yes in real life I do have large breasts, my sister has large breasts, my mum has large breasts, but do i flaunt them? No. I'm not like "HEY BOYS LOOK AT ME WOO WOO WOO!"
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'Maggie replied with a shy chuckle "I-I admit, I have an acne problem (which I tend to cover with copious amounts of make-up). Okay, I’ll take one please." She said meerily, diving into her brown side pack. ' - Page 83, my first post.
Now Compare that too a description of Princess Garnet from Final Fantasy IX who we are constantly reminded of her beautfy throughout the entire game.
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Garnet Til Alexandros XVII (ガーネット・ティル・アレクサンドロス17世, Gānetto tiru Arekusandorosu Jūnanasei?), is the heroine of Final Fantasy IX. Garnet is the Princess of Alexandria -- one of three major nations located on Gaia's Mist Continent. She is the only heir to the royal throne. A beautiful young woman,
Admitting to having a facial flaw does not make me a contender for britains Next Top Model. My illistrations are that, just illustrations, fan art, if their canon then they will be in my profile for all too see and not in my sig or art thread. Those are for development purposes only. I think sex Appeal is a very strong and powerful tool that women possess and should be proud of, and if im guilty of drawing my character provocativly then fine, but that still shouldnt make me a mary-sue.
For the record, I do note and laugh at being called Miss fanservice.
Mizz_FUJIN
|Maggie || Forest Path (Walking along)|
"2 words Bobs: Awesome Bewbige!" She mused before returning to the two observers.
"Jealousssyyyy!" She heckled with a crooked howl toward Al and the new girl.
"Bobbie, they're jealous of our Ruv! <3 Quickly, let's immigrate"
"It's manly!"
"Seriously, my costume is ridiculous. I can do this. Check this out!" Maggie started undo her hair and began combing it forward, then she took her aviators glasses out of god-knows-where and stuck em where her eyes sockets shudda been.
"Hey there, I'm Maggie, I was the one in the bed when you thought Riku was being inappropriate" She chuckled "I was laughing so hard under the cover."
"2 words Bobs: Awesome Bewbige!" She mused before returning to the two observers.
"Jealousssyyyy!" She heckled with a crooked howl toward Al and the new girl.
"Bobbie, they're jealous of our Ruv! <3 Quickly, let's immigrate"
"It's manly!" "Seriously, my costume is ridiculous. I can do this. Check this out!" Maggie started undo her hair and began combing it forward, then she took her aviators glasses out of god-knows-where and stuck em where her eyes sockets shudda been.
"Hey there, I'm Maggie, I was the one in the bed when you thought Riku was being inappropriate" She chuckled "I was laughing so hard under the cover."
This is proof enough that not only do I joke at my unexpected attire, I'm not too fond of it, it's my own subconsious confidence in the dressphere that wan't me too look and feel confident and not of my own free will. (because my bobbies bring the boys to the yard.
It's fanart, any canonacle artworks are only displayed in my art thread and that shouldnt even apply..
9. Do you frequently describe your character's beautiful/handsome/cute attributes or point out how sexy your character is?
No I dont frequently (–adverb often; many times; at short intervals.) point that out.
"Maggie's sexy abs brushed against her sexy skirt, her sexy hair blowed in the sexy wind. " - Fake
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The teenagers eyes widened, this woman's appearance was immaculate, shining eyes, polished skin, groomed hair, everything that Maggie wasn't.
If I were to describe my beauty, Surely i would compare my looks too Princess Jasmine? Infact it's the polar opposite, Maggie feels like an ogre infront of her (more or less) Maggie is a timid girl who would much rather be in a polo neck than a short skirt. If I am sexy I am unaware of it shouldn't I be giving Princess Jasmine beauty tips?. For more information, read the above.
16: Has your character been in a lot of physical fights and/or battles, but doesn't have many noticable scars to show for it?
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/2263/bluefields.jpg
Recently her fight with her Replica shows the trials and tribulations she had to go through in order too, she looses the battle almost loosing her life. On several occasions Maggie has almost died.
Cory tried to kill her in Agrabah.
Diablos almost succedeed in
Near death experience when fighting
Raine thought she had killed her
And many more. Realistically, her body should posses numerous amounts of scars. Being in heavy battles takes its toll, because we're dealing with Fantasy verses Realism, Potions and healing spells melt away any scars present. Arguably though, Squall's scar wasnt healed but that was due too plot device.
18 c
Clothing chosen because it makes your character look super sexy and/or badass?
Human, practical clothes, an outfit which is both comfortable to wear and my chosen style. The Zombie Nurse outfit in my sig, isnt official it's just a template, if it was canon then i would put it in my profile or describe it. Due to the very little description i put in my post when i first arrived in Halloween Town. Everyones knows how indessisive i am with my art
20 Is your character impervious to any of the normal limitations and/or weaknesses of his/her species?
So you're basically saying, am I like superman? No.
Impervious
Quote:
–adjective
1. not permitting penetration or passage; impenetrable: The coat is impervious to rain.
2. incapable of being injured or impaired: impervious to wear and tear.
3. incapable of being influenced, persuaded, or affected: impervious to reason; impervious to another's suffering.
1. not permitting penetration or passage; impenetrable: The coat is impervious to rain.
2. incapable of being injured or impaired: impervious to wear and tear.
3. incapable of being influenced, persuaded, or affected: impervious to reason; impervious to another's suffering.
If this means being immortal to all attacks then i am strongly against this.
controversly, if by which youu imply that all characters SHOULD be incapable of impalement then in both regards this question shouldnt of been ticked. This question is completely illogical and thereby implys to all characters that swords can't peirce their bodys because of the Fantasy spectrum. All Dressphere's are impervious to wear and tear but our skin is not. Sora pierced a keyblade into his body to retreave Kairi's heart and therefore his body is NOT IMPENETRABLE OR IMPERVIOUS to Harm.
By Mizzomuffin
Cloud is not impervious too sword penetration either, being an Ex-Soldier and Mako induced, here we see him with dire injuries, suffering from large gashes and bloodied scars. This picture shows that in the Fantasy realm, Blood IS present, even in a 12 certificate film.
Now here comes the Kingdom Hearts Debate. There is no blood in Kingdom Hearts becuase it's disney centered, but it is implied just in like the original Advent Children. Cloud was hacked to its by Sephirth, he showed no blood but it is implied that he suffered brutal damage.
There isnt a rule saying that blood or gore should not be mentioned in the rp.
Seeing as this the rating has been changed to a PG-16 fo rthe Replica's sake, there is going too be exessive use of voilence and blood. Its unaviodable. The reason why there is one rule for one thing and not the other, others have expressed their wounds through the use of blood or heavy beat downs.
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"A-ansem!" Her voice was barely above a whisper, as if all the air in her lungs was taken.
Maggie the muck monster swirved to where the voice boomed from, her eyes were up on the roof, and suddenly she felt like wetting herself.
'Oh no, oh god no, it’s…h-him! He’s so much more scarier in real life..
We…We can’t win against him, my body; it’s frozen stiff, my legs are tembling.What can I do to protect a princess from an evil guy like that!? I haven’t had any battle training; I have no weapons, not to mention I’m a spineless trollop.
24 Does your character have a side that tends to get him/her in trouble with authority on a semi-regular basis
My character is downplayed through major events for this too even be noticed or cared for. I didnt even know. This isnt not true, i dont not have a rebelious nature nore do I do it on a semi-regular basis, I have always protrayed my character as a law abibiding (if a bit insicure of where her loyalties lie & her darkness)
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"That was what I said Jasmine, before Ansem whisked you away. I can’t..I can’t..leave..?" there was a long pause, looking up at the sky felt like an eternity.
The girl squinted her eyes tightly to avert the long gaze and retreated "I can’t…Do this!" She sobbed.
The frightened child ran into the opposite direction of the carnage, weaving her way threw as many alleyways as she could before she was stopped by her conscious, like a brick wall, stopping her from pressing
"That was what I said Jasmine, before Ansem whisked you away. I can’t..I can’t..leave..?" there was a long pause, looking up at the sky felt like an eternity.
The girl squinted her eyes tightly to avert the long gaze and retreated "I can’t…Do this!" She sobbed.
The frightened child ran into the opposite direction of the carnage, weaving her way threw as many alleyways as she could before she was stopped by her conscious, like a brick wall, stopping her from pressing
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"That was what I said Jasmine, before Ansem whisked you away. I can’t..I can’t..leave..?" there was a long pause, looking up at the sky felt like an eternity.
The girl squinted her eyes tightly to avert the long gaze and retreated "I can’t…Do this!" She sobbed.
The frightened child ran into the opposite direction of the carnage, weaving her way threw as many alleyways as she could before she was stopped by her conscious, like a brick wall, stopping her from pressing on.
"That was what I said Jasmine, before Ansem whisked you away. I can’t..I can’t..leave..?" there was a long pause, looking up at the sky felt like an eternity.
The girl squinted her eyes tightly to avert the long gaze and retreated "I can’t…Do this!" She sobbed.
The frightened child ran into the opposite direction of the carnage, weaving her way threw as many alleyways as she could before she was stopped by her conscious, like a brick wall, stopping her from pressing on.
Maggie does NOT rescue the princess, she does NOT save the day, she runs in the opposite direction, making her a total coward.
27.Does your character have unusally free, enlightened, or "liberated" views on sex and romance for his/her time/place
In what context?
30. Does your character get away with things that other people would get into serious trouble for under the same circumstances? (Like openly defying his/her superiors.)
I don't know. Do I? Pray tell, Rae, enlighten me.
31. Are The Rules of the universe bent or broken for your character? (Like joining a group despite being too old or too young.
Nope. I'm the average age. NO universe is beant around me. I an barely bend a spoon.
32. Does your character have a spitfire personality, sharp wit, attitude, and/or strong temper?
Strong temper? I'm laid back. Sharp whit? I'm ignorant. Attitude? Do I run in peoples faces giving F bombs? No.
38 - 1 How many animal companions does your character keep? (Ordinary, non-magical pets like cats and dogs do not count.)
Summons don't count so Endikido dosnt count, he's part of Gilgamesh's attack. Monty definantly dosnt count because he isnt my 'pet' he dosnt follow me around, he dosnt drool or poop in the street, he is a sophisticed companion with a mind of his own, a well thought out and developed character, he is a minor character at best. And my current Mentor in Alchemy. He is my Support, my aid.
Chocobos count as a pet because you have to take care of them, clean them, feed them since they dont have the necissary skills to do that. I dont even have on of those D:
41. Does your character share your favorite types of movies, music, clothes, etc?
Obviously, but why did you tick this?
44.Does your character pick up new skills unusually fast during the course of the story?
No. No I do not. Zexion and a few others have specified that i am incredibly SLOW at developing new skills. I had to take a side quest so that i could be on par with some of the people. I brought books on Alchemy which i struggled too read, I didnt actually mix anything until my side quest and even THEN I still struggle. I do not pick up things fast. My weapons also dont appear for ages and ages because my confidence hinders me from doing so. In the end Kyle stated that I had to do it at some point else Maggie would be in the process of being left behind. REGARDE!
Mizz_FUJIN
Maggie is shown struggling with her items
51. Does your character have telepathic and/or telekinetic (Force-like) abilities in a world where this is unusual?
Nope.. It dosnt say in my profile that I have Telekinetic abilities, i cant lift stuff up with my mind. If you're talknig about the necklace. Me and Kyla are unaware of the connection for most of the part and are unaware of how it uses our feelings too empathise with one another. We dont have Telepathy, Its our hearts communicating and not our minds. Its through the trinket that we can do this, it amplifies our feelings for one another, enabling us too feel safe and secure. IT dosnt give us mind bending powers nor does it give us the upper hand in battle. Its just a necklace with the power of friendship (lulz) Infact it's kind of like the Kingdom Hearts 2 Staple. How does Kairi hear Roxas' voice? Go figure? The power of friendship of course!
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a# Do these powers allow your character to 'see' or just 'know things' without actually being there, allowing him or her to save the day?
Again. No.
54. Does your character possess unusual healing powers?
Alchemy. Potions. Not that unusual by KH/FF standards.
56. Does your character end up in a tight spot and discover that he/she has really cool powers that were dormant and/or unknown before?
Nope. I wish my cool powers helped me out against Cory, or when Diablos tried to take over my mind, or when he buried me, or when Replica Raine tried to gut me or when--You get the idea.
61. On the other hand, if your character does bungle almost everthing, is he/she quickly and easily forgiven for it?
I do bungle, alot. and Im not easily forgiven for it, Just look at the above critique, the only one who does forgive me is Jenny.
64 d # Does your character alone have a weapon that...
Is magical
Not alone. Everyone has magical weapons.
The alchemy pot was because i didnt have a dressphere, leaving me weaponless and handicaped. Its only recently (and i mean recently) that Maggie discovered her weapons. In the KHrp I was just known as the girl with Alchemy.
67. Does your character possess a unique trinket that is magical and/or has some special significance?
Yes, and Yes.
76 h. On the subject of your character and his/her family...
Lived in the streets?
Excuse me, Rae but when have I ever told you I have lived on the streets? I have never told you anything about my background or my family, my Bio has nothing because its not deemed interesting. Apart from all the other things I have been acused of, this is where I draw the line.
83 Does your character angst about something that he/she did in the past?
Alot, but latelty everyoens been doing it. I try too keep a cheery disposition.
86. Does a major villain have a personal fixation/obsession with your character?
I explained this one to Kyle on Skype.
1. For no apparent reason?
Sigh. =_=
87. Is your character ever spared by a villain?
Never, it's only by sheer luck that i've crawled my way out of te situations.
90# Do you feel insulted, attacked, or defensive when someone does not like your character?
In this case, yes I do feel offended and defensive about THIS litmus test, the fact that Rae did it for me and disregarded any knowledge for my defense. I dont know what your intentions are but i personally feel attacked.
91? Did you feel that this test insulted or attacked you or your character so far?
Yes.
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3 Does your character share a notable physical characteristic with a canon character, or at least have one that is remarkably similar? (Genetic resemblances do not count here.)
Notable phyical characteristics? No. Because from where im standing, my mum didnt inetially mold me too look like anyone from within the womb.
6 Was your character trained in some art by or with a canon character?
Auron but was neither taught nor instructed, he said he couldnt teach her because her style of weapons and fighting style were different from his own. Riku couldnt either because his was a different style too. Maggie's untrained skills are a hinderence too the group and so she feels presured into learning different skills.
Monty soon becomes my mentor and he isnt canon, I was frustrated by the lack of help so i made my own plot to counter this.
13 Does your character carry around a trinket of some kind that's similar to and/or somehow relates to a canon character's previously-unique trinket?
The locket. Which is key to Maggie & Kyla's friendship, there is a resemblence to Kairi's sea-shell charm but the powers they possess are entirely different.
21 - 2
How many major characters does your character fall for?
You mean fall in love? None. If you mean Zexion, i havnt fallen for him, nor have i expressed my feelings for him. I may over-exagurate them but i havnt blatently wrote it out in the rp either. They remain ambigoius, neither here nor there, i only do that for fan speculation (lol me and Jenny tease each other about it). If we're going by fanart standards then surely MaggieLoius is canon, lol. I hardly know the guy to make such a statement.
22. How many minor characters does your character fall for?
NONE! If you know of any, tell me. Has any minor characters fallen for me? I'd love too hear the list.
25. Assuming your character has non-canon friends and/or peers somewhere, does he/she hang out with the canon characters more than his/her own friends or peers?
I most certainly do not. My base of operations is usually with Kyla or Bobbi or Jenny.
I tend to small talk the canon characters like Zexion, Sora etc. I would realy like to get to know them more though.
34.Does your character save the canon characters from a situation or come up with a solution that they probably could have done by themselves in the original? (Admittedly, lead characters tend to be phenominally lucky, but still...)
Not that I know of.
37.At any point, does your character take over the job/position of a canon character?
never. I don't find myself skilled or allegable. I would never steal the lime light of a canon character intentionally or otherwise. That would be for Kyle's job as leader perhaps. Agrabah was plot device, I needed a summon, i didnt know how to get one, and even then I was very downplayed and descreit. and in Narnia i had too finish off the Hades/Diablos plot arc since i was told too anyway. After that, I havnt had many appearences.
37 b Because you think that the character who already does this job isn't good enough
What are you accusing me of? No, of course not. Have I ever said that? No. I said that Kyle probably wasnt fit to be the leader because of his empathy thing and the fact that she doesnt know the team that well to lead people he hardly knows, but i never said I'd take over.
38. Does your character get kidnapped by the bad guys?
Cory, then Diablos then Raine.
38 a Do the canon characters immediately come to the rescue?
No, they don't, they dont go out of their way to help me, nor do they constantly fuss over me. Kyla, most definantly, but she isnt canon, is she? obviously XP
Sora or Riku didnt save Maggie out of their own accord, it was because of Kyla's influence otherwise they would be none the wiser.
38 c Does it take place in another world, which your character is familiar with
Isnt everyone?
no.
38 d Is your character vital to the resolution of the arc/plot?
Isnt everyone?
Not that I know of. I'm a minor character and I admit that in one of my posts.
Mizz_FUJIN
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Maggie showing her cowardice.
In short, dont stress yourself over it Rae, let me do my own Litmus test, thank you. The fact that you think you know me well enough that you did the test for me without my knowledge or consent really has left me baffled. These are my answers, they should be enough for you, for us to both drop this.
Maggie showing her cowardice.
In short, dont stress yourself over it Rae, let me do my own Litmus test, thank you. The fact that you think you know me well enough that you did the test for me without my knowledge or consent really has left me baffled. These are my answers, they should be enough for you, for us to both drop this.
