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Final Chronicle Chapter One:
It all began that night almost a millennium ago. A lonely god and a very beautiful Queen lived in an ornate palace built from the fragments of the universe. One autumn evening when the stars and sky where clear and the moon was a bluish hue the Deity, Jirehsachi and Queen Serenity where walking in a labyrinth of roses just like they always did from time to time. From when out of no where a dark demonic dragon who's nostrils where thick with eerie smoke and eye's colored pools of blood descended from the sky and attacked the Queen with it's lance-like claws and spear-sharp teeth. Serenity before she died from a most gruesome blood drenched death threw a crystal of peculiar color to Jirehsachi and demanded him not to let the beast obtain the stone. It was the Omnistone, a mysterious and lusterous orb that glistened with dark and mysterious power if one where to gaze into the crystal long enough they could witness the hole of reality. It had the power to do anything at will for the bearer. The dragon, Atlantae' tried to seize the Omnistone but then a light radiated from the crystal. Jirehsachi began to glow with power as he flew high up into the sky and shot fatal beams of light repeatedly stabbing into Atlantae' sealing his body into an endless slumber while successfully killing Atlantae' or so he thought. Before Jirehsachi's body became sealed he saw the Queen dead upon the grass, he lifted the palace into the sky and teleported it into places unknown high up in the sky.

Time went by and the palace remained in the clouds. Jirehsachi created from the Omnistone eight other crystals with his heart each representing one of the eight elements, right when Jirehsachi became sealed he said to himself. I shall scatter these stones so that the dragon of darkness never finds them in the next life, if one was to obtain these mystical stones before he, and bring them to me; I will grant the bearer one wish, because I know how it feels to not receive what is rightfully yours. Through many years Jirehsachi became incarnate with his born power of spiritual projection he took many human forms spreading his story throughout many generations secretly.
One cannot visit the palace without the crystal hearts, Jirehsachi appears to be a young man who never aged. When the Omnistone is restored Jirehsachi's true form and power will set the world back into balance.






User Comments: [4]
pinko alien
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Sat Aug 08, 2009 @ 08:33pm


Very good, but you misspelled "twerpy". Some words are unnessecarily capitalized, some that need to be capitalized aren't, a few commas are missing, but other then that, great. =3


Blackfish15
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Tue Sep 15, 2009 @ 01:41am


Amazing Story...you should publish it...really im serious you have quite the gift. Im always ...uh...dreaming stroies like this but never can get it in writing.


mimmersk
Community Member





Tue Sep 15, 2009 @ 04:19am


umm, nice avi and name ...and congrats!!!


Pnoy_Hocin123
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Tue Sep 15, 2009 @ 08:17am


hi what is the about of story plss can u told me
what is the about of story and title?


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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