OMG, my ex-friend Paige just told me that she hates me! You probably don't know her. Anyways, I wrote 2 poems about it and I think they rock!
Rejection
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A slap in the face
Confused and alone
Loneliness equal to being lost in space
Definitely not in a happy zone
Who says words are just sticks and stones?
They have infinite power
Words can give great comfort, or a chill through the bones
They can cause you to weep, cheer, pray, or cower
And words such as "It's over, we're done"
Or, "We're breaking up, you dope"
"This is indeed, the end of our fun"
can erase any trace of hope
But tears may very well start
Confusion will spread though your mind
And sorrow through your heart
At the sound of words so unkind
And you may very well wonder
Why does this have to end?
To think we were once friends, what kind of spell have I been under?
And will my heart ever mend?
And what did I do wrong?
I like this one! ^^
Great friends we once were
Always together, always by each other's side
We weren't exactly inseparable, but we were somewhat close
But then day by day, you soon started to
Drift a w a y
Hanging out with other people, talking about other things,
And leaving me in the dust
It's happened before, with other friends, so you're not the first
But you're the first to tell me so, that we were through
And although, again, your not the first, each time a friend begins to
Drift a w a y,
I always feel down, confused, sad, and left behind,
And wondering, what I did wrong
For those who noticed, I used the almost exact same lines at the end on purpose. It gives great emotion and feeling to it, don't you think? Please comment, and my Deviantart is naussica55, so check out my stuff there! ^^
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