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Cheruma
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Cheru's writings part 1: Unrhymming poems
Few unrhymming poems I made during class..
The english translate isn't good and it doesn't realy work in english... Sorry..
Finnish[Original]:
Jotain punaista
Ruusun terälehdet
Horisonttiin laskeutuva aurinko
Vaaleat kirsikkapuun kukat
Auton perävalot pimeällä tiellä
Veri, joka tahraa jokaisen syntisen

English:
Something red
Rose's petals
Sun that slides into skyline
Ligh-coloured flowers of Cherry tree
Car's rear light on dark road
Blood, that stains every sinner

Original:
Jotain valkoista
Tuore lumi talvella
Pilven hattarat taivaalla
Liljojen kauniit terälehdet
Luut, jotka aika on nakertanut
Kuolleen kalmankalpeat kasvot

English:
Something white
Fresh snow in winter
Clouds in the sky
The beautyful petals of lilies
Bones, that time has gnawed
Dead's pale face

Didn't get working translate to this..
Sakurabana(= Kirsikkapuun kukka/Cherrytree's flower)
Kirsikkapuun kukat.
Miten kauniit,
Miten lumoavat kun putoavat.
Värinsä saavat,
Kun juuret puun alle haudatuista
Ruumiista veren imevät
Ja kukat punaavat.

Didn't even bother to translate, cause it wouldn't make sense at all...(includes finnish word play)
Voileipä?(Sandwich?)
Veitsi välähtää
Kurkku katkeaa
Punaista joka puolella

Ovi kalahtaa
Lapio välähtää
Kuopan kaivaa
Salaisuuden hautaa
Kirsikkapuiden lomaan





 
 
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