lovest harding
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/5/4/9
『Creativity:』 ?/5/4/9
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/4/3/7
『Completeness:』 ?/4/4/8
『Critical:』
+1 I like the evolution of the avatar itself over the course of the contest, not to mention the growth of it as a character.
0, got nothing really pressing to say. I think there could have been a little bit more of the 'presence' of the king of the gods that the challenge was asking for. You touched on it in the end though...
『Overall:』 34
『Character:』 ?/5/4/9
『Creativity:』 ?/5/4/9
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/4/3/7
『Completeness:』 ?/4/4/8
『Critical:』
+1 I like the evolution of the avatar itself over the course of the contest, not to mention the growth of it as a character.
0, got nothing really pressing to say. I think there could have been a little bit more of the 'presence' of the king of the gods that the challenge was asking for. You touched on it in the end though...
『Overall:』 34
『Darkness』
Jamais Changeant
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/4/4/8
『Creativity:』 ?/3/4/7
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/3/3/6
『Completeness:』 ?/4/4/8
『Critical:』
0, I'm feeling the avatar and the story but nothing is really wowing me with this entry.
0, some balance issues a slight too much red in the head, and the dark teals in the torso are also a little off. But that is just being really nitpicky. Aside from those things it is a decent entry. The story is entertaining as well.
『Overall:』 29
『Character:』 ?/4/4/8
『Creativity:』 ?/3/4/7
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/3/3/6
『Completeness:』 ?/4/4/8
『Critical:』
0, I'm feeling the avatar and the story but nothing is really wowing me with this entry.
0, some balance issues a slight too much red in the head, and the dark teals in the torso are also a little off. But that is just being really nitpicky. Aside from those things it is a decent entry. The story is entertaining as well.
『Overall:』 29
『Earth』
Ratt Scabies
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/3/3/6
『Creativity:』 ?/3/4/7
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/3/2/5
『Completeness:』 ?/3/3/6
『Critical:』
-1 I know the string of avatars is supposed to help the story a long but its starting to feel like a crutch for your final product.
-1, I think with all the flood of simpler avatars you loose a little bit of the punch that your final avatar should have. I think it might have been more effective to really solidify a couple of avatars and it would have been a better entry.
『Overall:』 22
『Character:』 ?/3/3/6
『Creativity:』 ?/3/4/7
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/3/2/5
『Completeness:』 ?/3/3/6
『Critical:』
-1 I know the string of avatars is supposed to help the story a long but its starting to feel like a crutch for your final product.
-1, I think with all the flood of simpler avatars you loose a little bit of the punch that your final avatar should have. I think it might have been more effective to really solidify a couple of avatars and it would have been a better entry.
『Overall:』 22
『Fire』
Elphaba the Renthead
Dropped Out
『Water』
Quiet Judgments
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/4/4/8
『Creativity:』 ?/4/5/9
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/3/3/6
『Completeness:』 ?/4/4/8
『Critical:』
0, I've got nothing to contribute. Keep up the good work.
+1, Again, I love how the characters all contribute to being a single entity. Only thing that looked off aesthetically was the purple in the head... a solid entry. You have really stepped it up this time.
『Overall:』 32
『Character:』 ?/4/4/8
『Creativity:』 ?/4/5/9
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/3/3/6
『Completeness:』 ?/4/4/8
『Critical:』
0, I've got nothing to contribute. Keep up the good work.
+1, Again, I love how the characters all contribute to being a single entity. Only thing that looked off aesthetically was the purple in the head... a solid entry. You have really stepped it up this time.
『Overall:』 32
