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Arctic Pride
The lonley poem
Yeah, one day when I was depressed..I wrote some stuff down just for the hell of it and to me I thought it was ok..It was just how I felt one day, you all can tell me if it was good or not. I'm not a poet.

Who are you?

Where are you?

Are you in my dream or in my heart

being alone forever is tearing me apart.

Day by day

night by night

Survival is for what I fight

The day my dream come true

My heart would stop feeling blue

Seeing love thats pure as a dove

I look for that experience before I reach the heaven above

Its true that to be forgotten is worse than death

I want to meet the one who will take my breath

where are you?

who are you?







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Machiavellian Princess
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commentCommented on: Sat May 20, 2006 @ 08:39am
Aww, it's so sad, and sweet at the same time.


At first, it's like this dampening, forlorned impression, but as any good peom, it gradually grows warmer with a comforting hint of hope.

Not to mention, love poems are my favorite. <3


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