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Where I Put My Stuff In :P Yeah, That's Right, So What Are You Gonna Do About It? XD
I'll put whatever in here, mostly poems and my book, though. I have a huge writer's block, though, and don't feel like typing the chapters right now. I'll probably be mostly typing poems in here Owo
Prologue

Darkness everywhere. Pressure on every part of me. Am I breathing? I can no longer tell. Who would've ever thought that I would end up dying like this. I'm not afraid of death, of dying, so why am I crying? I can feel them on my face, wet and tasting of salt. Ah, now I know why I am crying. My heart seems to know, too. Every beat of it feels like a thousand needles have been stabbed into my body, most of them concentrated into my chest. I would wince from the pain if I could, but I can't move. My whole body has become numb. Have I been drugged? Maybe. A sob escapes me. Dang, how did I end up in a situation like this? If only I never moved here. If only I had kept to myself like I would have done any other time. If only I hadn't met him, then at least this death would have been so much easier...


Fallen Without Sin
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  • User Comments: [2]
    Fallen Without Sin
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    Sat Jan 30, 2010 @ 06:23pm


    -squeals- It's mah first journal entry of the year, and it's of a book I plan on keeping to until it is finished! Meant to post this a long time ago, but kept forgetting sweatdrop So anyways, what do you all think? I have about another two chapters done, so tell me if you want to see them! 4laugh


    Evan_or_L
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    Sun Jan 31, 2010 @ 07:41pm


    I like it. I do want to hear the rest, but keep in mind this almost sounds like the twilight prologue. You know description of dying, meeting "Him". I do like the whole drugged thing. That's more real. Maybe stuff like that and remembering blacking out after being in vited for a ride in a car. I like the physical description. It's cool. Yeah, definately post the chapters.


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