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Nightmare's poetry,thoughts,songs etc.(you get the point)
I've been in poetry for 8yrs and song writing I took up at the beginning of summer of '09 and I enjoy it, I hope you like it:)
poem
"He is Consumed"

All the pain he keeps inside,
a lonely edge he waits to fall,
he runs from demons but he can't hide,
his reflection made from the darkness he draws,

a silver shackle binds his arm,
and wrapped up in a cloak of blood,
disgusted by reality's charm,
his tears creating the blackest flood,

dreaming he can take it back,
but nightmares clench onto his soul,
he waits for sorrow to attack,
integrity has lost control,

will his future be the cure,
or cut him short before he wakes,
with light in his hand he tries to endure,
but he's consumed by his mistakes,

wash away the misery,
temptation only looks for more,
if they dont know that this is me,
I have nothing left worth fighting for,

finally existence fades to grey,
to the afterlife he walks away....

Original poetry by:Me






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ErinTwin1
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 16, 2010 @ 01:45am
WOW! To cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!! heart


commentCommented on: Sat Dec 18, 2010 @ 07:10pm
why thnk you, i appreciate it smile



I Poop With Authority
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Metal Lil Pooky24
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 06, 2013 @ 10:07pm
wow awesome 3nodding


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