Well.....I used to say that I'm not a big fan of poetry and that I suck at em but this time, I really do like poetry. My poetry may not seem to be the best but oh well.
I started writing poetry when I got a particular sub for my creative writing class, Miss. Romito. She taught us a specific type of poetry called a Pantoum. And because of that little experience, I came to like poetry.
Poetry is easy except I have one problem that I absolutely hate: Topic
You can't write poetry without a topic, same with stories.
I do name my poetries but you know what? I have trouble finding a name for it! Why? Because I just go on to write and then I have no idea what to call it!
Anyways, here're two of my poetry that I wrote. The dates are for when I wrote them.
3/12/10
As time passes by, my love for him grows
Forever and never, will I ever grow old
Here we are standing, watching the world change
But there are some times when things remain the same
I am naught but a demon, a creature of darkness
Being immortal isn’t grand; nothing is bloodless
The only things I have left is loyalty and pride
Sometimes during the night, I weep and cry
Hopefully in the future, this world will have peace
But right now in this world, it’s hard to believe
3/12/10
I lie on my bed and wonder “What did I do wrong?”
To let my emotions out, I sing a sad song
I stare at my family and am filled with guilt
My life took a turn, my flower tilts
I want to run away, never to come back
But these chains keep me here and I’m locked in a shack
The only salvation I have is in my dreams
Sometimes I end up thinking about my past, remembering
The only thing I can do now is smile and laugh
Only a few people realize that I’m wearing a mask
Go ahead and feel free to comment. If you have an idea for a name, I demand you to tell me!
I started writing poetry when I got a particular sub for my creative writing class, Miss. Romito. She taught us a specific type of poetry called a Pantoum. And because of that little experience, I came to like poetry.
Poetry is easy except I have one problem that I absolutely hate: Topic
You can't write poetry without a topic, same with stories.
I do name my poetries but you know what? I have trouble finding a name for it! Why? Because I just go on to write and then I have no idea what to call it!
Anyways, here're two of my poetry that I wrote. The dates are for when I wrote them.
3/12/10
As time passes by, my love for him grows
Forever and never, will I ever grow old
Here we are standing, watching the world change
But there are some times when things remain the same
I am naught but a demon, a creature of darkness
Being immortal isn’t grand; nothing is bloodless
The only things I have left is loyalty and pride
Sometimes during the night, I weep and cry
Hopefully in the future, this world will have peace
But right now in this world, it’s hard to believe
3/12/10
I lie on my bed and wonder “What did I do wrong?”
To let my emotions out, I sing a sad song
I stare at my family and am filled with guilt
My life took a turn, my flower tilts
I want to run away, never to come back
But these chains keep me here and I’m locked in a shack
The only salvation I have is in my dreams
Sometimes I end up thinking about my past, remembering
The only thing I can do now is smile and laugh
Only a few people realize that I’m wearing a mask
Go ahead and feel free to comment. If you have an idea for a name, I demand you to tell me!
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