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Era of The Banshees' of the Fallen Sand Waker
Clash in the Mix
The chex creature stomped and settled as he thought of what trick the shogun could come up with by just standing there with no weapons. "What is the meaning of this you human wretch, do you dare insult me by not fighting or are you afraid?" roared the monster. "Neither, I was actually admiring the breeze you made as you run up to us. It seemed panicked and frightened like you were running from something or someone?" The other three looked questionitive and concerned that thier leader had lost it but, to thier surprize the monster began to change form.

"How could you have known that!? Just from the wind!!!" said the now mysterious yet, prezelt beautiful woman that stood before them where the creature once was. "It was also in your eyes and movements when you attacked us, you were panicked not distrubed, so out of pure fear you struck..." "Rather poorly I might add" interrupted Persona with a humorious chuckle. "So why, and what were you running from?" questioned jathope who seemed at ease now that she knew there was life in this bag of mid-lunch snack world.

The heroes and the woman all made up camp while she explained herself over a warm fire and bread stick squrrels that they had caught baking in the fire. "This place is so weird, its like a bag of Chex mix man, I wonder if the moon is just a big glowing cracker here?" said bliss as everyone but the woman looked up and noticed the moon was indeed a gaint Ritz cracker. "Wow I like how everyone but, her looked up after I said that" said bliss with a amused chuckle and smile behind her hand. "I'm sorry it's just that my brother and father have been at war with the Saltines on the other side of the bag ever since they came to our world, we don't know how they got here just one day under the half eaten moon they appeared hundreds and thousands of them." "All of them with thier sick, twisted, and cheap store brand taste and ingredents. I was running from two of them when I ran into you..." "Hold on a sec, you were running from them when you can turn into that gaint creature and just destroy them" interrupted Persona "You could have crushed them easily!!"

"Well you see my people have always had this ability to change form but,..." "But, what" said Bliss. "But, it is not our greatest strength it's more of a defensive mechinism for most of us and its not always a change of free will" "So let me get this straight Chi, was your name right?" "Yes" "Ok you only attacked us becuase we spooked you right? So did the two gaint Saltines not scare you?" questioned Jathope. "Does anyone esle notice two gaint cracker monsters about to attack us or is it just me?" ask Bliss.

"Grrrawr" "Everyone protect Chi, Persona your with me" ordered Shogun. "Right" said the other warriors in unison. "Ok, so what do we do mik" asked Persona "Man jazz I asked you not to call me that when we aren't in the Dojo, anyway I need you to take the one the left, I got the right" "Ok, mik" "Grrr, stop calling me that".

Persona charged and spoke and incantation as he ran toward the monster "Ria Saru Repulse" He yelled and a spell of raging spirit flames surrounded him and then burned the cracker fiend into ashes. "Done over here mik you need any help?" he yelled. "No, and stop calling me that,... wow you almost hit me there" "Rrrr stop moving and stand still human" "Ok you asked for it" said the shogun as the began to stand still and concentrated his stength. "One shot that's all you get monster" "With pleasure... Grrrr Rawr" the monster struck but, it had no effect or damage "Hmp to bad I'm already done preparing my attack" "What!?!" "Kruz So Crush" the ground began to tremble and quake and mystic stones began to upheave. "What is this power?!" "It doesn't matter what it is this is the end of you pathetic life" with that the stone crushed the monster into dust.

"Thank you so much for protecting me" "Silence" roared the Shogun "You lied to us and now I'll see to it you never lie again!!" "What do you me no I didn't I..." " Shi Wu Blast" the shogun prepared to attack "Now who are you really, and Why did you summon us here" "So you found out the truth fine I am......

To be Continued....






User Comments: [1]
Eighth_Seal
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Wed Apr 28, 2010 @ 11:40pm


Swell, and this time it had dialouge-though mik. when you use dialogue in paragraghs it was a tweed hard to see who was talking. Everytime you use dialogue press ENTER other than that no problems 3nodding


Other things, if running low on new stories...

Cherrios Vs Fruit Loops w/ "Amberto" in it having disputes in a charokee bar.

Persona calling "mik." over where it really is a mic. (microphone) requested

Bliss starting a bet, betting, and winning loads of money. Knowing one of the gamblers is holding out on her tell them, "alright, start hopping", to see if theyhave change in ththeir pocket they didn't give her.

haha, this is reminding me of Samurai Champloo when Fu, and Jean were stuck at this checkpoint (bound to be executed), and Lug. (I dunno how to spell it, anyways Lugan) and he ended up getting chased by those Tengen people, and ended up getting drugged by the scent of flowers with the entire Tegen people-Fu shouting, "WHAT THE H**L ARE YOU DOING?!"


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