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ジャーナル Jānaru I'll post stories here and probally anything else.


Eclipse-no-0
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Here I'll start with Haiku and other poems biggrin


俳句: 土砂降りの雨で (プロローグ) Haiku: In Pouring Rain(prologue) 
"Promise you won't leave"
"I won't, ever"he kissed me
his lips soft light touch

She starts to cry hard
tearfully she kisses back
rain pours down on them

Passionately kissing
they stand in pouring rain
together arm in arm


There I finished it in real Haiku format. (This is the frist Haiku I started the second one i finished)
-Cloud




The Tears Never Came Down
At her funneral
The girl stood dressed in black
her mother lay dead

She did not cry hard
the tears never came down, never
she cried inside

Now she was alone
sadly watching her mom's grave
she said a short prayer

she placed a rose
rose was her moms flower
her favorite flower

Rain came down on them
In pouring rain she stayed
she fell asleep there

Morning came she rose
to her surprise she cried
she soon after left

With tears rolling down
tearfully said her goodbyes
then left there crying


Its a sad Haiku about a girl who lost her mother. I hope you like it! [Its my first fully completed real Haiku]

-Cloud



俳句: 土砂降りの雨で (プロローグ) Haiku: In Pouring Rain(proloue) 
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俳句: 土砂降りの雨で

"これまで私を放置しないでください"
彼はキス私の唇を
その柔らかな光のタッチ
"これまで私はしませんが、"我々は一部

"あなたがしないことを約束する"
"私はあなたを残すことは決してありません"
彼は私にキスをした
私が泣くと戻ってキス

一緒に私たちは立っていた
土砂降りの雨で
しかし、浸漬した
情熱的にキス

もっと後
- クラウド

In Pouring Rain

"Don't ever leave me"
he kisses my lips
their soft light touch
we part "I won't, ever"

"promise you won't"
"I will never leave you"
he kissed me
I cry and kiss back

together we stood
In the pouring rain
were soaked but
passionately kiss

more later
-Cloud


I have an Hatena Haiku account so heres the link!





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