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Alone
Alone

With words I express my lonelyness
With tears I express my sorrow
With cries and pleads I beg you
Take it away so I wont suffer tomorrow

My arms empty and bare
My lips untouched and cold
No love to warm my soul
My heart is unable to unfold

I linger with dreams lapsed
I stand in the shadow of what use to be
The happiness I nolonger feel
The sobs escape and break free

Each tear black as coal
My soul heavy and dead
I am a walking corpse
But yet I have a heart to shred

Hopes have been destroyed
I stand alone in the distance
I cry for you to come for me
But I fear you're not of exsistance

I can't wait any longer
This ache will freely flow
So this bitter life I will leave behind
I will escape to my world of snow








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Nakittin
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commentCommented on: Mon May 01, 2006 @ 02:48am
That was very nicely written. I give a 10/10 for it. You know you should enter contests....go here
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I think you'll like it.

heart your poem


commentCommented on: Sun Jun 04, 2006 @ 02:19pm
crying
Such a good poem
crying
*glomp*



DarknessAngel292
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Usagioni
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 04, 2007 @ 03:38am
Oneechan, that was awesome!! heart
You are so talented. 3nodding


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