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The Journal of an Evil Person...MUAHAHAHAHA
Chapta 4 Has Arrived! READ DAMMIT!
Sesuke and Kohamaru get into a fight...A violent, dangerous one over one poor little defenseless girl....Poor little Yumi Takanaka!!

Sesuke- I don't think so! Don't talk to me...I have had enough of your s**t Yumi! Going out with Kohamaru...That makes me MAD! I think I'll go kick his a** right NOW! HUH YUMI!? HOW BOUT DAT!! YEAH!! *Turns around and runs toward Kohamaru* YO b***h! TURN AROUND!!

Yumi- NO!! SESUKE!! STOP!! *Runs toward Sesuke*

Kohamaru- Huh? WHOA SESUKE!!

Yumi- (...) *Unconscious*

Sesuke- Err? YUMI?! Oh s**t...What did I do!? Did she...Why'd she?? DAMMIT! LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO KOHAMARU!! *Takes a swing at Kohamaru's face*

Kohamaru- ME? *Dodges* YOU'RE the one who lost your temper Sesuke! You better stop trying to kill ME and make sure Yumi is alright!

Sesuke- Don't tell ME what to do, I'll make sure she's alright when I'm done kicking your a**!

Yumi- ...Kohamaru?? Sesuke??....

Sesuke- See? She's just fine! Now, b***h, FIGHT BACK!! *Punches Kohamaru in the face* HA! TAKE THAT YOU LIL f*****t!

Kohamaru- Sesuke-OW!--Just calm down and let me--OW!!!--Explain!

Sesuke- SHUT-UP! I DON'T WANT TO LISTEN TO YOU OR YUMI OR ANY OF THESE LITTLE BITCHES IN THIS SCHOOL ANYMORE!! WHY DON'T YOU JUST BACK OFF AND STOP TRYING TO STEAL EVERYONE'S GIRLFRIENDS!

Kohamaru- I'm not trying to steal Yumi away from you! She was worried that you were still mad at her so I was trying to make her feel better...That's what friends DO afterall!

Sesuke- YEAH, BULLSHIT! *Slams Kohamaru against the wall and knocks him out*

Yumi- SESUKE!! *Jumps on Sesuke and holds him down* ENOUGH OF THIS!! I STILL LOVE YOU DAMMIT!!! KOHAMARU WAS JUST TRYING TO HELP! YOU'RE BEING TOO OVERPROTECTIVE!! STOP THIS NONSENSE NOW!! *Hugs Sesuke*

Sesuke- I was just trying to protect you...I don't want to lose you Yumi...You're the only girlfriend I've ever had...I don't want to lose you just because I act like a little b***h sometimes...I'm sorry for over-reacting...I'm pretty sure you don't want to talk to me right now...I knocked out Kohamaru....I lost my temper when I shouldn't have...*Gets up and walks out of the school* Please forgive me....*Disappears*

Yumi- *Sighs* Poor Sesuke...*Looks at Kohamaru* Eh? Kohamaru? What's wrong...Hey...Wake up? HELLO? KOHAMARU!! WAKE UP DAMMIT!! *Cries* YOU BETTER NOT DIE ON ME DAMMIT!!! DON'T JUST STAND THERE...ICHIGO!! YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE WITH A CELL PHONE! CALL AN AMBULANCE NOW!!

Ichigo- *Pulls out cell phone* Ok...*Dials the number* Hello? Yes, we need an ambulance...Where? Techinaka High School over on Isichi Street...What happened? A fight broke out...One of the students...Huh? Who? Yeah...Kohamaru Tekishama...What is it? Yeah...He's unconscious...He won't wake up either...Think it might be serious? Yes...Of course! Ok...Hurry up...Bye! *Hangs up* They say they're on their way right now...And that we need to make sure he's still breathing and everything and----

Yumi- *Screams* HE'S NOT BREATHING DAMMIT!! THAT AMBULANCE BETTER HURRY UP!! YOU CAN'T DIE KOHAMARU!! crying

Somewhere near Isichi street..An ambulance goes zooming by...

Sesuke- Eh? An ambulance? Where's it going? *Turns around and watches the ambulance* THAT'S MY SCHOOL! *Runs back towards the school*






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[HYBRID_XERO]
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commentCommented on: Mon May 15, 2006 @ 12:58am
this si getting intense


commentCommented on: Mon May 15, 2006 @ 01:08am
twisted



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commentCommented on: Mon May 15, 2006 @ 01:23am
ICHIGO SAVES THE DAY!!! WITH HIS ENTIRE ONE LINE IN THE ENTIRE STORY!!! YAY!!!

not many people get to save the day in only one line in a story you know >.>

-claps- very good story neko ^_^


commentCommented on: Mon May 15, 2006 @ 01:31am
Come on Ichigo...You'll get bigger parts in future chapters!! 3nodding



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ichigonova
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commentCommented on: Mon May 15, 2006 @ 01:52am
did you see me complaining? NO!!!
see most people would have complained about their one line in a story
but I AM PERFECTLY CONTENT!!!
BECAUSE I SAVED THE DAY!!! WOO HOO!!!

and i think that ian could kick brandons a**


commentCommented on: Mon May 15, 2006 @ 02:06am
damn right nova



[HYBRID_XERO]
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commentCommented on: Mon May 15, 2006 @ 02:34am
*Falls over laughing* rofl


commentCommented on: Mon May 15, 2006 @ 09:19pm
agreed...
good story which is odd becouse i ussually dont like romantic crap.....
BUT I STILL DONT HAVE A PART! scream
oh well..... gonk



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commentCommented on: Tue May 16, 2006 @ 12:58am
Like I said...Both you and Tadashiini and Nova will have bigger parts later on 3nodding


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