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Who the ******** do you think you are?! My cousin spent a lot of time on that part of his story and you have the nerve to write over his words like that? Well, I have some choice words for you! You are what we all call an a*****e who dosen't have any sense! You are a peabrained son of a b***h and I don't give a ******** whether you care or not! He worked hard! So it may not be perfect but at least he tries to write a story and at least he was smart enough to ask for help! I don't see YOU putting a story up for strangers to read and ask for advise you b***h Assed whore! You dirty condom licker! I bet you don't even have one! No one is going to want to be around someone like that! I am going to talk to a very powerful Gaia player and I am going to make sure you are ruined! evil
And now for my rebutal...
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Who the ******** do you think you are?!
Well, I think I am myself.
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My cousin spent a lot of time on that part of his story and you have the nerve to write over his words like that?
Well, he needed to spend longer. And I guess I just had the nerve to point out a lot of mistakes, horriable grammar, and very bad logic.
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Well, I have some choice words for you! You are what we all call an a*****e who dosen't have any sense!
Says the angry person who has some choice words. Now what actually didn't have sense was ninety percent of the sentences in that story.
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You are a peabrained son of a b***h and I don't give a ******** whether you care or not!
The sad part, my peabrain is better than both of your brains together.
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He worked hard!
So, I work hard on a lot of things that fail. Your point? Just because somebody works hard doesn't mean that it is correct or good. And it definitly doesn't mean I should praise it.
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So it may not be perfect but at least he tries to write a story and at least he was smart enough to ask for help!
Well it was far from even decent. He tried and he failed. And if he reads the comments and understands that there is a point to why they're there, he'll be better off when he goes to edit again.
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I don't see YOU putting a story up for strangers to read and ask for advise you b***h Assed whore!
Once Upon a Modern Time
Bob Guy in East Jesus
The Gate of Keptra
Patriotic America (Essay)
He Died
Strike Three
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You dirty condom licker!
That is an outright lie, I shower every day!
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I bet you don't even have one!
Well I don't have any condoms if that's what you mean. Then again, I like to practice a little thing called abstinence.
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No one is going to want to be around someone like that!
Hum...
The Eleventyone
Author's and Audience
The Gaian Times Office
The Moonstar Inn
Gaian Veteran Soldiers
Salty Old Basterts
United Forums of Gaia (You'll notice me in the picture)
The Cult of Clavy
Hum, well there's eight of them, I guess I must be doing something right.
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I am going to talk to a very powerful Gaia player and I am going to make sure you are ruined! evil
Well you're talking to one right now. Then again, I wasn't under the impression that anybody "played" on Gaia. But, on a note of caution, I would hold off on contacting any moderators about it because unlike my post, this pm breaks a few rules in the TOS, which you did agree to.
Have a nice day.
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You utterly convinced in the negative, concerning the release of her name? She's just asking for someone to have a bit of fun with her, truly. :>