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A sonnet i made....let me know if you like it :) If love be blood, then i shall bleed till death If love be blood, then im the vampire seeking new blood If love be power and greed, what awaits is death If love be water, then im the rising flood If loves through sight, then it may not be found If love be fire, then i shall burn for eternity If loves through sight, your feelings end in the ground Finding love is hard and also a rarity Loves not a game nor gift but part of life To understand this you must have seen through my eyes That everyone is looking for that husband or right wife They mite not be around yet you can still visualize Once you find that right one it'll be the best You'll end up happy from this day till your rest!

Posted by: Jerzeeboii Sat Jun 17, 2006 @ 09:29pm

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sgt.Frosty
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Commented on: Sat Jun 17, 2006 @ 09:57pm


	well,i'm no poet myself but this was really good. 3nodding

Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 03:30am


	3nodding Tis spiffy. Did you have to write it for something?

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Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 05:37am


	That was a really great post. I understand your feelings on this subject. It's not easy finding the right one in life with everyone playing mind games but in the end the right person comes around to sweep you off your feet for all eternity. heart

Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 07:07am


	Whoa... that's good. Better than all the crap I write in my spare time. Faaaar better 3nodding

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Zane of the darkness
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Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 07:16am


	We have the same thought although I'm not a poet,I can't make a word beatiful yet attractive,this is great,It might be something weird(no offense) but I can still get what you were saying stare

Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 07:48am


	It's good man....im no grammer natzi because i misspell stuff all the time but "mite is spelt might" lol

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Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 10:09am


	thats true its really is

Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 11:43am


	That's A nice one^^

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Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 03:31pm


	I didnt know you were kind of a poet... I must say it's really cool indeed.

Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 05:27pm


	Beautiful... ((sniffle, sniffle)) Simply beautiful crying 4laugh You should make more poems 3nodding

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Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 06:08pm


	blaugh Me Like It. 4laugh Nice.. <3.

Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 07:29pm


	Simply remarkable!!! You've achieved what I have strived for all my life from the day I relized, heck I can make a poem! Your Sonnet has the right effect on people. Your talented! Make more!!!

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Cap`n Joe the Fro
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Commented on: Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 07:41pm


	It's pretty sweet dude!

Commented on: Wed Jul 12, 2006 @ 08:02pm


	wow is all that i can say

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