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The Adventure Of Teka & Riya!
About a girl named Teka and her sister Riya. Teka is the oldest she loves her little sister Riya very much and always trys her best to look out for her. Teka is always the one that worries about every little thing and gets perionoide a lot. Riya is f
Part 1: The Island!
Teka: (wakes up)..wat the...where am I?...wheres Riya? (yells for her name)
RIYA?

Riya: TEKA?....is that you?.....

Teka: RIYA!! omg help me out of here hurry!!

Riya: ok..ok..calm down let mefind somethingto open the box.

Teka: ok but hurry!

(Riya searches for something hard and solid to open the wooden box. Near the woods Riya finds a small thin sharp rock, sharp enough to cut through wood.)

Riya: Hmm.. looks kinda like an arrow head.

Teka: (yelled)Riya! hurry up!

Riya: (yells) uh.. Coming Teka! I found a really sharp rock looks like it could cut through the wood.

Teka: Ok just hurry up already, it feels like I've been in here forever!

(Riya starts cutting through the wood. Finally cuts a large enough circle for Teka to crawl out of. Teka crawls out and gives Riya a hug.)

Teka: Finally! I'm free! Riya where are we?

Riya: Idk I woke up by the shore in a box too, but only mine was already cracked open so I crawled out and started yelling your name. Then when I didn't hear a response, I started walking on the beach looking for you. Then when I saw a box like mine, I rushed to it to see if u were there. Then I heard you yelling my name, I was so relieved to find you!

Teka: I wonder how we got here... So do u remember anything?

Riya: Well not really...

Teka: This is just great! What do we do now? mad

Riya: Idk..Teka I'm scared. We don't even know where we are. How we ever gonna get home? crying

Teka: Idk don't worry Riya, I will take care of you and get us home. I promise. Well... lets start walking..here lets go into the woods maybe we can find a town or some help.

Riya: Good idea, lets go.

(Teka and Riya start walking into the woods.)

(5 hrs. L8ter)

Riya: Teka can we plz take a break I'm getting tired and my feet are really starting to hurt! sweatdrop

Teka: Well... I guess a little break couldn't hurt.

(Teka and Riya both ended up falling asleep. When Teka woke up she found herself and Riya in a cabin.)

TO BE CONTINUED......




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Teka
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Riya
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    JiWoo
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    commentCommented on: Mon Jul 17, 2006 @ 12:55am
    such a cool story!!


    commentCommented on: Mon Jul 17, 2006 @ 01:31am
    OMG, I can't wait till the next part. Would they ever figure out were they are ? blaugh



    Animejungle
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    zabuza momichi
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    commentCommented on: Mon Jul 17, 2006 @ 03:14am
    sweeet whee


    commentCommented on: Mon Jul 17, 2006 @ 03:19am
    omg! so good! biggrin biggrin biggrin



    Firenzied
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    _Bullet_#17
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    commentCommented on: Mon Jul 17, 2006 @ 03:37am
    that was one of the best journals iv read in a lon time nice story


    commentCommented on: Mon Jul 17, 2006 @ 03:46am
    I don't know how good it is because it was too long for me to read, but it was probably good since sweet emery wrote it.



    sagittarius_princess_12
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    Winry4
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    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 18, 2006 @ 11:58pm
    nice story! 3nodding


    commentCommented on: Wed Jul 19, 2006 @ 04:26pm
    meh, you kinda repeat the same stuff ninja



    KoooKeeez
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    KoooKeeez
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    commentCommented on: Wed Jul 19, 2006 @ 07:59pm
    this is what I mean : "She found a sharp rock that looked like an arrow, "hmmmmm this looks like an arrow"she said" ( thats one example) "She went over and helped the girl out of the box, (then blah blah blah they talk and stuff and then she says) " I dont know what happend we got here and I helped you out of the box" (Thats an other exapmle)

    hey, I'm only being honest rolleyes delete my comment on ur journal if you dont like it, sheesh rolleyes


    commentCommented on: Sun Jul 23, 2006 @ 09:36pm
    i don't really have intrest in these kind of stories... heh heh sorry!!! redface



    kiwi153
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    Mons Vesuvius
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    commentCommented on: Thu Nov 23, 2006 @ 01:36am
    burning_eyes


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