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This is where I describe my friends! note: I had everyone tell me! I copied and pasted!


vamp prince
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Teen Romance (a story me and my friend wrote)
One sunny morning a beautiful girl named Rini was waiting for her boyfriend, Frankie, to call her. She was sitting on her bed side when her boyfriend called. "Hello?" Rini said to make it sound like she had no idea who it was. "Hey Rini! I ws asking if you want to go out Friday night?" Rini put the phone down a shrieked. "Yes!" She said calmly. Rini didn't stop smiling until her friends, Krista, Miranda, and Andrea, called. They did 3 way. "Frankie asked me out! Friday night!" She smiled. "Oh really? Where? Joe asked me out to that new place around the corner." Said Andrea. Krista frowned. Angelo and me are going out to Mcdonalds!" "Well Rover is taking me to the amusement Park and we are going to be riding the roller coaster and than he is going to order take out food and we are going to go to the spot every couple goes to and look at the stars." Miranda couldnt wait as she was brushing her hair out. As they hung up the phone Rini also started getting ready. Even though her date was Friday. She picked out stuff to wear. She wore a Purple knot top, with jeans and black shoes to match her hair. Miranda would also pick out her clothes for fridaynight as she chose a pair of blue denim embrodered jeans as she would set it out for friday she hoped this guy and the future dates with him lasted longer than her and Luke. Krista was at her date already. She ordered the Happy Meal. She got a toy. Angelo bought her the princess toy. Krista felt akward to be in a dress at Mcdonalds.Miranda blinked as she thought some to herself as Rover called her to make the date change and she would rush to get ready as Rover drove up in his brand new mustang she was so excited as she would make sure everything was set. As everything was set Miranda called Rover to her house. When Rover came he saw that Miranda was in the most beautiful dress in the Universe. Miranda blinked as she had not chosen the dress she had accidentally put on her oldest sisters dress but she kept it on thinking Rover really most like it as she thought maybe Yuri wouldnt mind her wearing her dress especially if its for a boy she really loved. But what she didn't know when she left, Yuri also had a date and that was the dress she was going to where. Rini was at her date. Rini would look over at Frankie and she would smile as she looked at him she was having a fun time until he showed up. When Rini smiled Frankie smiled back as if he didn't just like her, he loved her and wanted to tell her but did not know how to say those words so he just stared into her eyes till Rini's ex came over for you see rini and Miranda dated brothers she dated Jake. When Rini's ex saw Rini with Frankie he wanted to beat up Frankie so Jake walked over to Frankie grabed him by his shirt and reared his fist and hit Frankie in the face. Rini and Miranda's eyes got big! Rini gasped. Jake kept kicking, punching and slaping. Frankie did not belive in fighting. So he did not fight back. But Rover would get in on the action by swinging his fist at Jake and Jake would drop Frankie and focused on Rover and hit Rover in the face, Rover's plan worked but Rover fought back this time. Frankie was breathing heavenly. Rini ran to where Frankie was. Jake dropped Rover and said, "Rini. If you step anyfarther next to that beast-" He was cut off by Miranda. "Your the one that is the beast!" "Shut up Miranda I was talking to Rini you little witch!" Jake would rear back and hit Miranda in the face and than walked to where Rini was at and grabbed her by her arm. Jake took Rini home. That night the phone was quiet. The only time it rang was for colletion calls. At school the next day the girls were scared to go even near their boyfriends, exept Krista and Angelo. These two were the crazy couple.Miranda was sad as she wanted to be with Rover and Rini aswell was sad she wanted to be with her boyfriend but here comes Jake he was very posseive and of coarse Krista walked right up to Jake she never backed down from wrong ever. "Leave my friend alone you jerk or i will shove you in your locker!" "Sure and after that we'll do each other's toe nails!" He said being sarcastic. "That'd be nice." Miranda said. As Jake went to slap Miranda Rini walked by and stared at him till he walked away but before He could even walk away Rover would be in Jake's face. "If you wanna touch any of my friends You have to go through me first." They started their own little fight right in the hallway. Jake would slam Rover into a locker as Miranda watched she loves Rover and she wants him so bad but was afraid to tell him because of Jake controlling them. All the friends were watching as for the teachers had foam fingers.Rover would have Jake in a headlock and hitting him hard in the face as the teachers were not strong enough to break the fight up because they were afraid of Jake's family whom controlled their town. Jake's dad was mayor. So if Jake wanted something he got it. He still had feeling for Rini in which Rini did not love Jake because Jake was not a nice person like Frankie but Jake would reverse it and he would begin to beat rover up pretty badly but Frankie cam out of nowhere because Frankie only fought when someone was being hurt like Rini did and he loves Rini so much that it was the final straw he had fed up with Jake. "Oh look who's back, peppy boy." Jake made fun of Frankie. Frankie was really mad at that point. He punched Jake right in the face. Jake would punch Frankie back hard as Rover would be punching Jake in the face as he and Frankie gained up on Jake as the girls watched and Andrea and Joe was walking hand in hand and Andrea blinked as she watched her brother deserve a beating of his life. She was smiling and imatating the moves of there kickes and punches but the principle came in and he was a big muscled up man his name PrincipleWilliams and he manged to break the fight up and well he also gave them in school supension aswell. Rini was sad when she heard that Frankie was suspended. She cared nothing about Jake. Rini would walk to where Frankie was and she would kiss his lips some when the principle was gone. "Oh Frankie I love you so much." "I love you too." He said kissing her back. when the bell rang they were kissing still. Rini put her tounge in his mouth and masaged it nicely. He would aswell massage it back as it felt nice he did not care if they missed their 2nd period class. He slowly lead her to the locker room. He slowly took off her clothes. she helped she would help him out as she smiled and she would run her hands into his hair some and whispered. "Oh Frankie lets skip the rest of the day and go shopping or something." He stared. He put on her clothes Rini blinked some. "Was it something I said?" He started taking off her clothes again. "You know what I mean." He said in a sexy voice. Rini smiled as she would help Frankie out of his clothes and smiled some. "Did you put out of order sign on the door?" "Yup!" He said. Rini would smile brightly as she would take his clothes off more and she would kiss him with passion as she loves Frankie. He kissed her back as she lay her down on the table. Rini smiled as she looked up into Frankie's eyes some she loved him so much and she would die for him. Outside the door looking in was Jake. Jake would open the door and he would grab frankie's hair. "Ow! Ow!" Frankie screamed as Jake pulled out some hair. Rini was shocked. Jake through Frankie outside and locked the door. It was just Rini and him. Jake took off his clothes and lay Rini on the table and got on with her. Rini screamed and fought to get jake off of her. He didn't get off. He chained her. and druged her to sleep.Frankie would break the door open and he would grab Jake by his hair and he would get him off her and begun to beat him. "Your back?!" Jake yelled. Rini woke up and put on her clothes in the girls bathroom. Rini was so scared and she was worried about Frankie as she shook tremendiously. "Yeah I am back you creep and I am going to beat the living day lights out of you!" "I'd like to see you try!" Jake twisted Both of Frankies armes. Frankie would break free of Jake's grip and he would punch him in his face and kicked him hard in his stomach. Jake bent down. Frankie kicked him in the face. Than Jake would tackle Frankie to the ground and he was ontop of him hitting him in his face and yanking at his hair as Rini just watched from the bathroom. "Go Frankie!" She yelled.Frankie would manage to roll him over on his back and he begun to beat him hard in his face as he was yanking his hair back. Jake managed to grab a sciscor and scrath Frankie's shirt to cause a big rip across his shirt. Frankie would rip some of Jake's hair out. Jake cut some of Frankie's hair. Frankie screamed so loud that the lunch room could here! James would put the scissors down and he would roll and be ontop of Frankie as james would begin to beat him somemore. "Rini slapped Jake. "If you let him go-" She was cut off bye Frankie. "I am tired of you hurting Rini I am going to make you pay!" He punched Jake right in the (cough).Jake would scream and punched Rini hard in the mouth. Rini was bleeding now. Frankie was upset and he would go after Jake and began to beat Jake up very hardly. The strong princebal walked by the door and saw the boys fighting. "You two are expelled!"Frankie blinked as he looked at the principle and than at Rini. "He started the fight Principle Williams and he also hit me James should be the one exspelled not Frankie!" Rini said. Rini was the best and trustworthey student in the school. "Very well." He said with a grunt. He draged Jake to the princables office. "Ooooo!" Frankie said smiling. Mr. Williams looked back at frankie. Frankie looked away. Rini would look at Frankie and smiled some as she hugged him some. "I love you Frankie and I am glad I have met you." He smiled. Same here, same here!" "What do you want to do now Frankie?" "I dunno?" "Do you want to go to my house and watch a movie?" "Do you have popcorn?" He asked. "Yes" said Rini. "Then let's go!" He said. Rini laughed. Frankie would hold Rini's hand as they walked hand in hand to Rini's house.


THE END






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Jacqueeeeline
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comment Commented on: Thu Jul 27, 2006 @ 12:44am
cool story!


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