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When I'm Bored!!!
well pretty much w/e is in here is either stupid stuff or just somethin for fun..although i have writen a few poems that i might put in here sometime.
well everyone...this is one of my poems...plz leave comments..and i dont mean ones that say something like oh that sucked i mean nice ones..if u dont have anything good to say about it just stfu and keep it to your selves cuz i dont give a flyin ******** ok....

Broken...

All the obstacles between us,
everything we want.
We can never rest,
until we come together.
All I want,
is to hold you tight.
With our love,
I will not falter.
We will march on,
through the darkness.
For when you're gone,
I know not the way.
I shall love you,
now and always.
For without you,
I am nothing except for...
Broken...






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dreamfar628
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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 03, 2006 @ 11:56pm
aww! it's so cute!
but it's kinda sad too...
you have talent for poetry! i hope u keep writing!
...i cant do poetry..i stink at TT.TT


commentCommented on: Thu Aug 10, 2006 @ 02:11am
That's absolutely beautiful.
You really do have talent.
I like it, great meaning.



Ioyunai
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haylin_vampire
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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 10, 2006 @ 03:02am
hey im loving this poem
it awesome
its very sweet and loving


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