Well am so bored!!! mad
ANd school is going to start!
not that I hate it, its better than working somewhere. which I don't! xd
but guess I'll write a poem or something?
Fire
Something burns
in my heart softly...
Everyday I look in
my heart, to the future.
To get something you
must first lose something.
So what will I lose,
what will I gain.
God help me, I
don't know what to
do. Underneath my smile
thats of glee.
My heart cry's softly
bacause of thee.
well thats it still bored stare
Alex Kyo And Yuki Community Member 
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It had nothing to do with fire, and it was not written to understand.
Underlef is not a word. *Learn how to write!*
My heart cry's softly
because of thee : What does that mean?!?!
You write poems as badly as talking or commenting people. And because I love doing poems myself....I'm going to say you suck at it. Get a job at something else!!!! 'Cause writing poems is for someone who like it, not because they're bored.
I don't care if it's for the heck of it, but you make writing look like low class.
And you wrote poem wrong! burning_eyes