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POEM
MADE ME CRY!!! SUPER SUPER SAD AND MAKES SENCE
Slow Dance
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Have you ever watched kids


On a merry-go-round?


Or listend to the rain


Slapping on the ground?


Ever followed a butterflys errotic flight?


Or gazed at the sun into fading night?


You better slow down.


Dont dance so fast.


Time is short.


The music wont last.


Do you run through its day


On the fly?


When you ask, "How are you?"


Do you hear the reply?


When the day is done

!

Do you lie in your bed


With the next hundred chores


Running through your head?


You'd better slow down.


Dont dance so fast.


The time is short.


The music wont last.


Ever told your child,


We'll do it tomarrow


And in your haste,


Wont see his sorrow?


Ever lost touch,


Let a good friendship die


Cause you never had time


To call and say, "Hi"


You'd better slow down.


Don't dance so fast.


Time is short.


The music wont last.


When you run so fast to get somewhere,


You miss half the fun of getting there


When you worry and hurry through your day,


Its like an unopend gift......


Thrown away.


Life is not a race


Do take it slower


Hear the music before the song is over...



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Not made by me!





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    Wolfy_Scorpio
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    commentCommented on: Thu Aug 31, 2006 @ 10:57pm
    Wow that is sad crying


    commentCommented on: Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 03:05am
    i dont get it but that's cause i'm stupid



    Haku93
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    Nauscica
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    commentCommented on: Sat Sep 23, 2006 @ 01:35am
    o.o that's long enough that it will take me the week end to read it cause i'm a procrastinator. n.n


    W.A.P.!! WAR AGAINST PROCRASTINATION!! =D

    *cough*yeahright*cough*

    n.n


    commentCommented on: Mon Oct 02, 2006 @ 03:02am
    arrow woof(wow xd ,if It would take me days to make a poem like that 3nodding ) idea



    blackwolf1000
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    The Queens FolIower
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    commentCommented on: Sat Oct 28, 2006 @ 05:02pm
    to silence the sorrows of my heart
    finding no respite
    i unwillingly have my art
    to find in more depit

    a love is a thing we cannot control
    eathlings cower before them
    for soon the beings will exist,no...cease
    and let go of theyre hold

    i sent this to you
    my love and my heart
    till love splits us by your cold words might
    i say i love and till death do i part


    commentCommented on: Wed Dec 06, 2006 @ 11:54pm
    its great you should be a poet



    Immortal Misfit
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    Mercury_Heart
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    commentCommented on: Tue Jan 02, 2007 @ 06:00am
    Dude....that is so emotional and true....dang.....I am taking life waaay too fast. Before I know it I'll be dead... eek


    commentCommented on: Sun Jan 21, 2007 @ 07:17pm
    hmm nice..poem..makes sence..but..somtimes to enjoy somthing you'll miss out on others as well.



    mist1987
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    Mrs Lovett Todd00
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    commentCommented on: Wed Apr 04, 2007 @ 01:42am
    VEEERY NIce. ^_^ ^^ biggrin


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