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Captain Jack Sparrow says, "You bloody well better read this!" No. Not really. But the ORMBTVRJ does have a lot of truthiness in it. Yes. Really. And it's been authorized by NAMBLA. No. Not really.
NOW OPEN TO TEH PUBLIC.
time for peace
this is the second half of the story that i left off in "time for war".

now that the civil war is over, there is an immediate need to rebuild. the rebels are forced to help repair the damage. there is a council formed to help govern, which raysha is a part of. but the council cannot decide on what the focus of the reconstruction should be, though raysha fights for the building of schools and temples so that a semblance of normal life could be seen. the rebels also deal with getting people to trust them. in her personal life, raysh (now 16) is healing from a gunshot wound she received in the last battle. the doctors say she will only live to be 22. tren, a former rebel leader (age: 17) has caught raysha's eye and she has a major crush on him. he exhibits lots of kindness, helping raysha deal with nightmares that remind her of her childhood. eventually they both fall in love with each other. meanwhile, raysha works to rebuild as not only a planter, but also giving semi-secret self-defense classes for young girls. then tren and raysha are sent to help the village raysha came from. its completely fallen apart, and raysha and tren must fight bandits to regain control of the town. in the process, tren gets kidnapped. raysha, desperate to find him, makes an exchange with the Goddess (the main religion revolves around one Mother Goddess), if whe gives up her life force, she'll be able to rescue tren. the Goddess agrees. using powers provided by the Goddess, she finds the bandits and rescues tren. then, at the age of twenty, she dies in tren's arms.

bittersweet endings are my favorites. *sniff* crying






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-Nightmare_Hitsugi -
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commentCommented on: Sun Sep 10, 2006 @ 04:23am
awww... That's sad crying but good HEY!!! Suki dies when she's 20 too!!! mrgreen 4laugh crying


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 10, 2006 @ 05:14am
aww..........dying young is sad. crying cry



okami_katana
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-Nightmare_Hitsugi -
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commentCommented on: Tue Sep 12, 2006 @ 11:04pm
Yep but I guess that's why we made it that way!! huh??? crying 3nodding xd mrgreen 4laugh whee


commentCommented on: Wed Sep 13, 2006 @ 08:50pm
yep! 3nodding (note: i keep changing the plot a little. heh. sweatdrop )



okami_katana
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-Nightmare_Hitsugi -
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commentCommented on: Fri Sep 15, 2006 @ 01:56am
That's okie dokie I still trying to figure my middle to BHE and how long it's supposed to be sweatdrop 3nodding mrgreen 4laugh


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