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PU CASLTE: Revenged


5 long years hav passed since the pu wolf puupy disappeared along with the pu kitty kat, during the 1st year of the dissapearences there were search party's sent out from the neighboring villages and the home villages themselves of course. The PU CASTLE was a place that they beleive they had gone last, and the PU animals talked to the PU alligator if he had known the whereabouts of the PU babys, but the PU alligator simply nodded his head back and forth and acted as though he had nothing to do with it, however, while the tragedy that it was that the PU alligator had eaten the PU babys so young, this would give birth to the story's of the future, adn the adventure of the now.


The PU Puupy watched the PU castle, his eyes tired becasue he had been watching the castle all day and it was now night time and his eyes were making out blurry patterns of the castle.
The castle was huge, and the moute around it was gigantic as well, the pu wulf puppy had no where to go, he had ran away from his home, he was the same age now as his brother whom disappeared 5 years ago, but unlike his brother he veiwed him self as weak and pathetic and he could not stand living with his parents anymore so he had gone off on his own to try to make a life on his own, he didnt know if he would survive, but he would rather die then live around all those pu animals who veiwed him as just......a mass of illequivalance compared to his brother. His features resembled those of his brothers with white fluffy ears that reached to the sky and a small lil tail, only difference is that he did not have a spot over his eye like his brother did, he was all white.
He watched the castle.....he wanted inside, he knew it was the only place that the they village hadnt searched, for it was forbidden for anyone to go inside.
" but what if my brother went inside there....and got locked in.....i dont care if its forbidden im going in there".
The Pu puupy walked slowy up to the castle and heard a rusheling in the bushes behind.
" hey!" the pu puppy screamed turning around to see what was in the bushes beyond, "i heard you come out or ill use my magic on you!"
"calm down stupid" the voice was familiar......
"steph....stephani O_o is that you?"
The pu puppy stephani walked out from behind the bush scolding trent for his harsh use and abuse of the word magic,
" you know you're not supposed to use that word! magic is forbidden unless there is a very important reason to use it! and we both know you can't use magic effeciently, pft, i could tkae you out with a single thunderbolt, meanwhile you're flamball would prolly somehow end up hitting you stare "
Trent the PU puppy looked down at the ground,
"honestly Trent what are you doing out here? i heard that you ran away....witch is just silly, here take my paw and lets go back"
Trent refused her paw and told her his reason,
" i wont go back...... never......im sorry steph..... you're the only animal i care for in this whole world anymore.....go ahead and head back to the village and ill follow....".
Steph knew he was lying, she knew he had fallen in love with her before, when they were both so little, and she was just 2 years old, and he was a little more......but then his brother died when he was 3, and he changed.......so much.........no......steph wasn't gona let him do whatever he was planning,
"listen you.....village told me to get you...so im here and im going to take you back.....so im not leaving until--" she was cut off by Trent jumping on her and pinning her down with rage in his eyes,
" SH...SHUTUP STEPH! YOU ARE A LIER AND I HATE YOU, I ALWAYS HAVE, GO BACK TO THE VILLAGE YOU STUPID ,GO BACK!" with that he got off her and started walking across the bridge to PU castle.
Steph started to cry, but then she saw something drop and hit the ground at Trents feet as he was walking across the bridge, he dissapeared into the shadows then becasue it had gotten so dark.
"tren.....you cant do this..." she whispered to herself, she looked back towards the village and then back to Trent as she whispered,
" you're not the only one who fell in love trent....."
then she followed him quitely so he wouldn't notice.






Trent approached the huge bulking door, and saw a smear of red on it, the caslte was beautifull except for that one spot that bothered him so much even though he had no clue why or what it even was.
Trent heard a voice........
"well well, it has been about 5 years hasn't it since the dissaperences of those other 2 lilttle pu animals now hasnt it?"
Trent knew who the voice came from
" shutup you stupid alligator..... you are such a despitefull creature it doesn't make sense why they have you around this moute"
"hahahaha why, you know as well as i do little pu wullfy puppy that entry to this gate is forbidden you do"
" ya i do, but so is magic, adn if someone is caught doing magic.....then the punishment ranges but usualy death isnt one, and i know thats what you do, because you're a disgusting creature, and would most likely be in charge of somthing like that"
"hahahhaha o yes, well someond has to do it they do, for inside those gates lies secrets that arnt ment to be viewed by the worthless pu animals of this time there are"
"HA! and who are you to judge us as worthless, look at you'reself, you're the most disgusting animal around"
The PU alligator stumbled over his next words,
"arr-arrogan-ant little......its not wise to bring out thee anger in one such as me....but....." The alligator gave a snicker that would freeze the bones in even the most devilish of pu animals,
" if you really think you're worthy of entering the PU castle....then just say that you want in, for you're brother could well be int here"
"dont talk about my brother...." The PU puppy realized that his brother could be insde somehow and his hopes lifted from the bottom of the well where they had resided since the first year his brother had gone missing,
"wait....you could help me in?"
"hahahah just say the word"
Trent was so frightened and he didnt know why....but he was anzious and wanted to see what was inside,
"let me in, i want to see if he is in there!"
"hahaha".
The Tail swang at him and he was able to dodge it for his eyes were better then most PU Puppys eyes and he could make things out clearer from further distances.
The tail still hit him in the side, and he yelped in pain as he fell on the hard bridge, he tried to get up btu the pain was emense and he fell back down with a cry
"what...why! you cant murder....you-"
"well" the PU alligator explained,
" I can and have murdered and that is how it goes....hahahaha you see i am the gaurdian of this castle and all who wish to enter may be devoured by me, it is against no laws, i have this power, it is my curse, and my responsibilty" as the PU alligator spoke he rose from the water reveiling his whole upper body, it was humongous, his teeth were so big and his mouth was snarled and ugly, Trent knew it was over.
" I told you're brother before i gobbled him up that he was going to be forgotten and he actually wrote on a peice of paper not to forget him HAHAHA, then he tried to use fire magic on me as though that could really effect me!!!!!" his voice echoed, it was so loud, Trent wasn't surprised by wut he heard...he felt it, that his borther had died here by this thing, " i am the PU alligator, how dare you offend my with ur blissfull ignorance, im not just going to gobble u up im going to skin you alive as you scream in aggony hahahaha, and then jsut like i did the pu kitty who was foolish enough to go in the caslte after being set free from punishment, ill gobble you down before you can blink hahaha!-" Then there was a massive explosion louder then anything Trent had every seen before, and it was so bright that it blinded him for a second, but he saw something that made his heart morn even more then ever before, Steph had used all her magic up to make a humongous explosion of lightning and the alligator took the hit to the head, but the htink was so humongous that it just was taken off gaurd, Trent watched as steph slowly lost energy and was about to fall over, as the alligator hit her and she flew back to the edge of the bridge, dangling off.
Trent was so shocked and he felt such pain, but the love he felt for steph was more then any physical pain could stop him from saving, he ran after her as fast as he coudl with the shearing pain in his arm, the alligator was screaming loudly in rage, and by the time Trent got to her and covered her from another blow he decided what he was doing was pointless and he started to cry because he knew the mighty hit would end his and stephs lives......but it never came, and then he looked up and at the alligator....and what he saw amazed him.
Trents brothers magic of the fire ball (so much stronger then Trents fireball) was glooming before the alligator, adn was making it back down, he had no idea where it was coming from, all he knew was that he had to get steph to safety before teh magic failed, The door to the castle opened, he did not understand why, then he ran inside carrying steph in his mouth, then he passed out beside her as the gate closed.




Steph woke beside Trent, there was blood all over him...and on her too....then she realized it was her blood adn that her left side hurt alot, but she managed to get up. She tried to wake Trent but he wouldn't wake up, then she looked up to notice something, it was atable with a peice of paper on it, but thats not what caught her interest, way in the back behind a statue she saw something that bewildered her.....something that she couldnt put her paw on...but she had seen it before she could swaer....in a book or somthing.



"steph..."

she looke down into Trents eyes

"trent...."
" are you ok steph?"

steph felt warm inside and layed down with him,
"ya thanks to you, were both ok"

"o......im so tired tho---......"

and with that Trent fell asleep and Steph followed him into his dreams




























TA DA! apparently i gota do another one stare but boy this took like an hour to righ tor somthin O_O

XD

tell me if u like pllsssss i luvers me comments






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dj78x
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commentCommented on: Sun Sep 17, 2006 @ 09:14pm
o that was a good story dj


...o wait i wrote it XD


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 17, 2006 @ 09:41pm
LOL just lol



T e f f i s R a d
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teh_sexay_hoHO
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commentCommented on: Mon Sep 18, 2006 @ 12:04am
omg that was soo awsome! heart


commentCommented on: Mon Sep 18, 2006 @ 06:43am
Awww, yeh this one was much more serious. XD *Is shoked by your creativity* Very well done.

XD I'm use to reading things like this, I beta stuff. razz Lol, nice work! Looking forward to your next entry of the Pu collection. xd



Yutaka-Hataka
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Punke_the_Hare
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commentCommented on: Wed Sep 20, 2006 @ 09:40pm
o i love it!
its so awesome! heart
--->Aurora


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 24, 2006 @ 04:47am
cool



DarkKittyMistress
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karlene
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 28, 2006 @ 04:20am
eek heart !
-waits for sequel-


commentCommented on: Tue Feb 13, 2007 @ 11:34pm
U NEED TO MAKE ANOTHER ONE!! THAT WAS A GREAT STORY!! mrgreen



Chewydog
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medo_MULE
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commentCommented on: Mon Feb 04, 2008 @ 01:14am
I'm touched! crying You're amazing Devon, absolutely amazing! crying I can't wait to read the next one!


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