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this is a poem I wrote for creative writing it was after my fight with FallenPaganSaint and I was upset when I wrote it enjoy
Broken
I broke the promise
broke your heart
now I lie weeping
for you to come back
I call and you don't come back
I lie in the shattered remains of what once was
The gold band on my finger it's mate on the floor at my feet
tears shed like salty rain drops
A single lie can cause the distruction of to love sturk lovers
We spat back and forth
filled mosty with hurt
I feel my heart has been ripped out of my chest
And I'm sure he feels the same
I love him more then anything
And I hope and pray he still feels the same


well that is it feel free to give me contructive critasm or commplemts