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Deep in the heart of londons 19th century is the story of a young maid who goes by the name of Emily Rose. whos the daughter of the medic and his maid that he poisoned..... at the age of 17 she is hired by the rich and extremely handsome count. Jame
''Why marry wether, this dress is absolutly beautiful!"
''Thank you, it took forever for the old man to complete"
"well to my personal opinion, its for sure worth the wait''
Sunday morning came by so fast i thought to myself. I was amazed of how time can really send one into a daze. As i tied and pinnedeach eligent lace bow on the young girl's dress i found myself jealous of her beauty, and shes only at the age of ten! I myselfis often call beautiful but when i looked at me i noticed it was rather i sickly type of beauty.
"Oh, i almost forgot"
I looked up at Marry's smiling youth as she bounced
'' i have a surprise for you!''
"ok in just one...more....minute....'' i mumbled as the metely taste of the pin needle tickled my tounge. As soon as i finished your Marry dashed to the anique amore and pulled open the doors. there in front of my eyes lied a magnicently charming black and white dress.
'' Wow marry this is beautiful, i must admit im jealous''
''well this might make you feel better....this dress.....its yours''
My eyes instently widended.
''Your kidding?!''
'' Not at all, when me and my dearest brother went to pick up the dress we saw this lovely item here on display. We both agreed it had ''you'' written all over it, so we bought it for you to wear at Mrs. lanna's pary.'' Then she turned on her heels, and said '' come come now lets see how this dress fits''.........


Its finally evening That short statement kept poping in and out of my head the whole day. I looked in the mirror, the dress fit me perrfectly. It was starpless and showed rather alot of my chest, but i had i long sparkling collar with blue topaz dangling down and gently braced around my neck.
''Emily your hair is so soft''
Marry was curling my hair in rings, she had aslo but i type of head piece in my hair, and in the right light it sparkled with the most magnificent glow.

The first scene: a huge decorated marrble and gold ball room. All around me was the presence of the '' important people''. There was i lovley song playing on the piano, it reminded me of the ''puddle song'' from my late night stroll.
'Edith!''
I looked down to see marry hugging another small girl with silky light brown hair and clusters of frecles on her face.
'' Hi im edith!!!!' the girl explained to me while revealing that one of her two front teeth were missing in a smile. ''COME WITH ME MARRY THE VIEW OUTSIDE ON THE BALCONY IS AMAZING!'' th elittle girl shoutted and the two ran off leaving me alone........

''HES HERE THE KILLER, THE MASKED MAN, AND HE HAS KILLDED EDITH''
with that one sentece everyone began to scream and run. Glaces were braking, people were screaming, as Marry ran out from the balcony after telling everyone the starling news.
''he killed her EDITH IS GONE''
she cried into my dress i looked down, though i had no clue who Edith was i felt a strong pain for her.
''girls! what are you doing standing there''
turned to see the count, my master, he grabbed my free hand, for the other was being squeezed by the scared little girl. Time passed everyone left, but there was a few crime investigators in the house,looking for clues and found edith's head chopped off. My master's leg was cut pretty deep from trying to get Marry and myself through the crowed.We all sat in what was kinda of like a library.
''This is absolutly terrible!!'' and out can Mrs. Lanna. Then came a deeper voice,
''well why dont we send all you home for the night there enough stress here to make any guest uncomfretable''. out came her soon to be husband Mr. Endertive.
'' How can you say that hes obviously hurt! the least we can do is give him a place to stay for the night'' Yelled the scared and slightly scared Lanna.......





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    arugala
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    commentCommented on: Wed Oct 11, 2006 @ 09:55pm
    wow!!! that is serosuly powerful stuff you're writing! that's likE AWESOME!!!!! plz be my firend. *puppy dog eyes* biggrin 3nodding 3nodding smile biggrin smile mrgreen plz???


    commentCommented on: Thu Oct 12, 2006 @ 03:03am
    **claps** A tip of the hat to you my friend



    Tharkun-kazad
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    lalalala234567
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    commentCommented on: Sun Oct 22, 2006 @ 08:36pm
    wow thats great!


    commentCommented on: Fri Oct 27, 2006 @ 11:38pm
    That is some powerful stuff dang girl your good at writing.
    and I say bravo, that was so great.



    philipina5
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    hmng_hawjgurlo
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    commentCommented on: Sun Feb 11, 2007 @ 02:20am
    dat is great stuff...... i luv it....when r u gonna post another 1.....


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