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Lost Soul of Commando
Lost soul of Commando
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Commando laid down on the building, setting up the sniper rifle. He looked through the scope, there was a huge bomber sitting on the runway. He looked in the cockpit, no pilot yet. He looked around the huge plane, spotting some guards. “Lazy fools” He heard talking and spotted the pilot walking to the plane. He pointed the gun to his head, and tried to pull the trigger but could not. He pointed his gun into the cockpit window, and aimed at the pilot again.. But still could not shot. His feelings where keeping him behind. He watched as the plane started and took off. He quickly turned on his radio “Ma’am?” He could hear a woman’s voice talk back to him “What is it Commando?” “I have bad news, Mission failed” “What!?!?” “hm…?” “Do you know what that bomber target is?” “No, and I have no tension into caring” “Yes you will after you hear this” “HQ?” “No, your home town” He froze in thoughts. Thinking of his mother and sisters death. He quickly slid down the ladder. The guards spotted him and started shooting “I hear gunfire, what’s going on?” Commando ran across a field and gets shot in the shoulder, he only grunted and kept on going “Commando!!!” “I’m fine” “Fall back soldier, That’s an order!” “I am not following any orders at the time Ma’am” He jumped into a jeep and started it “…Commando?” He bashed through the gate and got onto the highway “I’m going back home” she said nothing in response. When he got to town it was to late. He slowly got out of the vehicle. Watching as fire burns a black smoke creeps its way to the heavens. He walked on what was left of the road, listening to the screams of people. He got to the house and it was totaled. He saw some movement in the rebel and he quickly ran over to it, clearing it up. When all the junk was cleared, there laid Vicky. Her clothes where gone, and her skin was covered in Blood, Cuts, Ashes and bruises. He stared into her face “Leon?...What happened?” She coughed blood “shh, Stay quiet. You need to heal” He hugged onto her tightly “take off the mask…” “Vicky…” “please…” He takes off his mask, Letting her see his damaged face. Tears went down his cheeks. “I love you…Leon. Don’t forget that” She slowly get up, He stared at her. Then all of a sudden he heard a bang, Blood went all over him “Vicky!!!” He shouted. Her body fell into the dirt, and behind her in the distance was a enemy with a sniper. He quickly stood up, pulling out his rifle and shot the enemy in the head. He bent down, and kissed Vicky on the forehead. “goodbye…” He put his mask back on and left the town. Leaving his past behind, and also his soul. For blaming him self for every thing that ever happened.






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World Aurora
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commentCommented on: Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 06:39pm
crying thats...terrible...*clings on to you*


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