Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

Enter The Unforgiving World...
grave and forcasting tales from the unknown, including a peak at my novel The Unforgiven Legacy, The short Story Nothing Left, plus ther things i have written like poems and other stories.
That dream again...
I had that same dream again, the one where im out of my body watching, just watching.
The winds brushing against my cheek, im looking, searching, finding. I squint my eyes towards the sunrise and take a deap breath, i know something terrible is about to happen, but what?
I hear a screach and turn around hurridly avoiding contact with my ever present surroundings, i see my body lay there helplessly, its just lay there, silent and earnest. I feel the pain even though im disconnected from the flesh, a piercing scream fit to condemn an honest man to a life of misery tears the silence apart. My expressions blank, but only for a moment, then im back, back in the thick of it, in the centre of the chaotic melody.
There's a mele of appirations and lost souls scattering the perimeter of my body, each one more vigorous than the last. I know im stranded but all I can do is watch my lifeless body break into a cold sweat from the attention it is recieving.
Then, suddenly, a towering figure swooped out of the night sky, the wind howling and hissing as it fought against the earths natural powers to retrieve its prize, to retrieve its pick of destiny. The one who is capable of withstanding the forces of evil, the one who has the very power hidden deep inside his still developing mind.
As i watched my body being swept away I felt my presence drifting away, cautiously towards my unsuspecting body. I wondered if it new the path it had chosen, the life it was about to live, the dreams it was about to shatter.

My mind toyed with the possibilty of it not actually being a dream, I treated it more as a prophecy than a dream. Not the bad sort of prophecy but the almighty, overwhelming prophecy of destiny. It was my Destiny to save mankind, my destiny to summon all evil back into the brimstone of the underworld, my destiny to find out who I truly am!.






User Comments: [3] [add]
Saphira Moonlily
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Sat Nov 18, 2006 @ 09:12pm
so kawai hehehehe i knew you had it in you!


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 22, 2006 @ 05:18pm
Good. I like the way it's starting. Once you clean the grammar and spelling up just a bit I think it'll be really good.



Tsynni
Community Member
Shade Shadowheart
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Sat Dec 09, 2006 @ 10:51pm
i dont knopw wether or not to keep this in the unforgiven legacy or put it in the insignificant as a dream wht do you think??


User Comments: [3] [add]
 
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum