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Rains Forgotten Tears
((I started writting this a long time ago and finished it yesterday night. There are probly alot of spelling errors (seeming as I can't spell to save my life) but I hope you like it.Its a song so the * is a chorus...please leave comments...corrections or sugesstions(sp) are welcome.))

Everytime I look at you I feel like I'm flying.When our hands brush as we pass each other my heart skips a beat. I lose myslef in the oceans of your eyes. eveytime I close my eyes your face is all I see. In the first rays of sunlight my first thought is you. But as I reach for you it seems you always turn away. you don't know the way I feel or mabey you just don't see me here. no matter the reason it doesn't change the pain I feel


*As the rain falls down like my forgotten tears I remeber the healing power of your kiss, and I realize its been far to long since I felt the warmth of your arms around me and far to long since I've felt your love.

Why must I watch her in your arms instead of me? how long muts I wait a forgotten soul hidden behinde the one you look at with love? What do I need to do to show how much I love you? how long must I pray to the heavens to give me your affection? I'm still counting the days till you will finally see me.

*

I am held from speaking my mind by the thorns of my friendship with her. When can I let my love for you bloom like a rose in the spring? I want to be the one who holds you when you are sad. I want o be the one who makes you smile and laugh. Why can't I be the one you want to protect?

*

I guess for now all I can do is wait and let my tears become one with the rain. Mabey one day I'll become the one you love, but for now I guess I will be the rains forgotten tears.







User Comments: [3]
blackkitten12
Community Member





Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 09:06pm


do you have a beat down and I don't have any ideas what so ever....


[~fluffy Vincent~]
Community Member





Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 11:00pm


it's nice really has a cheerful feeling


Okirininami
Community Member





Wed Dec 27, 2006 @ 03:15am


* eachother* put a space .......its realy good....* o *- one?? i really dont think i can help much


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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