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Tsubaki is sitting down in class watching the clock count down the seconds before summer vacation, 5.....4..... 3..... 2...... 1!!! *BRRRIIIIINNG*

“I’M FREEE!!!”

After school Tsubaki meets up with Tori.

Tori: "Hey Blue. So are
you going to ask Tac out or what?"

Tsubaki: “I don’t know …*blushes* …He's so
cute and what if he doesn’t like me?”

*Tori rolls her eyes*

Tori: BAKA *wacks the back of Tsubaki's head* “Just go ask him
out already! Look, there he is! Now’s your chance…”

Tsubaki slowly walks over and before she can say anything Tac asks

“Hey, you’re Blue, right?

Tsubaki: yeah

Tac: hey we should hang out this summer, maybe catch a movie

Tsubaki: ok. *blushing*

Tac: ok how about this Friday at eight?

Tsubaki: sure I'd love that, see you Friday ^_^

Tac: ok see you there

Tsubaki squealing back to Tori… “I'm going on a date I can’t believe I got a date
with Tac!

Tori: see, I told you

Tsubaki: thank you so much *squeezing Tori so hard she can't breath*

Tori: can't breath!

Tsubaki: oh sorry! Hey, Paradise is having a sale on cute tops you have to come with me.

Tori: I don't know, I should go home

Tsubaki: pleeeaase? I'll buy you ice cream…

Tori: really?

Tsubaki: of course couldn’t leave my best friend ice creamles

Tori: ok

Tsubaki: now lets go. XD

She grabs Tori's hand and run's to the mall down the block. They shop for a while, then Tori said

“oh no… its 6:00 I've got to get home. I‘ll see you later?”

Tsubaki: ok bye Tori.

Tsubaki is sitting by a water fountain eating ice cream when she gets phone call from Ace, Tsubaki answers and says

“hello?”

“Hey Blue there’s this party, wanna’ come with?

Tsubaki: I probably shouldn’t…..

Ace: pleeeaase?

Tsubaki: ok, where is it?

Ace: alright!…. It’s at my house, get here as soon as you can!

Tsubaki: ok bye.

Ace: see ya.

Tsubaki hangs up and takes a train to the party when she gets there
she finds Ace and Guy and says

“hey guys” they answer
“hey“. Ace says

“Just thought
you’d like to be here cause there’s tons of cute guys!!!”

Tsubaki: I don't need a guy I already have a date with Tac ^_^

Ace: awesome I'm so happy for you

Tsubaki: thanks. ooh, I love this song

Ace: really? Ok then, lets go dance.

a few hours later Tsubaki realizes that it’s late so she tells her friends bye and leaves for the train station and she goes home when she goes through the door she notices a note on the desk from her dad

~ I had a last minute meeting in Nagasaki.
I’m staying there over night.
I’ll be back tomorrow.
Your brother is in charge until then.
-Love dad.


Tsubaki: oh no Nii-chan is worse than dad about my curfew…-_-;

she looks over and finds another note from her big brother saying that he went out and that he'd be back later

“yes… I’m off the hook”

Tsubaki lets out a big sigh and slowly walks up stairs flops onto her bed. She wakes up to her alarm clock at 7 am because she had to meet with her friend Mae at the gym. So she slunked half dazed to the bathroom to take a shower. She took off her clothes put on her robe when she remembered that she had no clean towels so she went to the laundry. At that time her big brother’s friend was staying over night and was going to take a shower so he got in the shower and started washing his hair and then Tsubaki grabbed a clean towel and walked back to the bathroom opened the shower curtain to find her brother’s friend Toga taking a shower and screamed running back to her room blushing.




there you go thanks for reading blaugh