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UKNOWING UKNOWING Watching them watch you, as you slowly unwind Seeing them see you, as you lose your own mind. Not knowing what to do, or when to do it Wondering what all this is and what will come through it. God still loves you, they tell you not to fear Satan creeps closer, and nothing is clear. You know your friends care for you, why must you fret? These inner feeling toss you about, your're always in debt. Light shinning through showing you the way Darkness whispers in your ear, telling you to stay. Panicked and worried, anxeity fills you Unknowing, terrified, that there is nothing you can do Trying to smile so you won't make mistakes Crying on the inside, for everyone's sakes. Looking forward and seeing nothing Looking back and here it comes, the unknowing drawing closer Feeding on fear and smiling when you weaken Laughing meniacally it knows you've been beaten.

Posted by: Mourn-and-Torn Fri Feb 23, 2007 @ 10:00pm

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Commented on: Fri Feb 23, 2007 @ 10:32pm


	wow ward that was soo deep... the Trying to smile so you won't make mistakes Crying on the inside, for everyone's sakes. kinda applies to me sumtimes XD good job love the poem... its really deep and sad at the same time... kinda creepy to but i rate u a 100/10 ^^

Commented on: Fri Feb 23, 2007 @ 10:38pm


	yeah mia, at that part((the one u mentioned)) i thought of u and me so lol yes and AWW TY XD it's supposed to be my thoughts... ((.0001 percent of them))

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Commented on: Fri Feb 23, 2007 @ 11:00pm


	good job ^^ u described me perfectly XD wow thats ur thoughts? i think its a really good poem...i cant ever do poems like that XDD if its for skl i make good poems but for me they turn out...BLEUGH XDD ;_; regret the day i invented the poodle poem....but i got a 100 so thats all just earned weird looks from mah teacher XD ur welcome btw i really like ur poem it kinda describes me in a way ^^

Commented on: Fri Feb 23, 2007 @ 11:47pm


	crying

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Commented on: Fri Feb 23, 2007 @ 11:48pm


	aww cyn wats wrong??

Commented on: Sat Feb 24, 2007 @ 01:49am


	Cyn if ur sad because of this please don't be, and yes mia IT IS what i think and feel, that is usually the only reason i write, is to express my feelings or thoughts or ...points to poem good and bad. anyways and yeah well...umm..ur welcome?

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Commented on: Sat Feb 24, 2007 @ 04:32am


	thats kule ward...i cant do taht i either bottle it up (i noe i shuldnt its a habbit hard to break) i draw though....cant write tried it didnt help...me express nethin XD i either write everythin i hate on a paper then RIP IT UP in pieces ^^ I FEEL BETTER THEN XDDD

Commented on: Sat Feb 24, 2007 @ 06:43am


	Mia, bottling it up isnt always soooo bad lol hug it's the way you do it, for ur case, it isnt bottling it up, because u tell God i'm sure, and u've told me some stuff, so dont beat urself up so much ^_^ ur ok

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Commented on: Sat Feb 24, 2007 @ 06:39pm


	(ya i edited this...i dunt want it in here XD) XD hugs bak kinda late XD

Commented on: Sun Feb 25, 2007 @ 12:31am


	Wow...X_X and no it's ok, i dont mind late replys XP well i hope ur ok now, and i guess not XP

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Commented on: Sun Feb 25, 2007 @ 03:34am


	lol okie nah im fine ward it was cuz of that stalker dude...he did lots....that scared me XD OH WELL LIFE GOES ON AND IM STILL ALIVE ALL THAT MATTERS ^^ SO YAY IM HAPPY NOW AND HOPEFULLY I WONT GET IT AGAIN ^^

Commented on: Sun Feb 25, 2007 @ 04:29am


	At least I'm not in your signature anymore..................hehhh....Dx

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