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My life
this is for me to put pics and write about my gf
*When He*
When he looks into your eyes
He sees what you want to do
When he kisses you
He sends your mind into a peaceful place
When he holds you
It makes you feel protected
From everything in the world
When he does everything right to you
You ask him to marry you
He disappears on you leaveing you in the dark
You read the newspaper and find out
That the one that did everything right
Has passed away out of sight
Then you take your life
In the middle of the night
Where you are out of sight
So that you can Join
The one that you wanted
To be joined to in marriage
In heaven for enterity with him






User Comments: [10]
Bunny_ Wunny
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Tue Mar 06, 2007 @ 08:54pm


Nice poem, Timmeh. I like it.. alot =)


Bleu Marqui
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Tue Mar 06, 2007 @ 08:54pm


Aww That is so cute 4laugh , thougha bit sad cry


shensi_101
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Tue Mar 06, 2007 @ 09:36pm


wow... YOUR FLIPPIN EM-AZING!! Seriusly though thats really good ^_^.


Captain Obi
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Tue Mar 06, 2007 @ 11:05pm


I love it, it was really really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


mimiru_002
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Wed Mar 07, 2007 @ 12:03am


aaawww! how touching! ^^ u wrote a good poem


Kitsune The Blood Fox
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Wed Mar 07, 2007 @ 01:06am


heart heart heart heart heart heart heart ^_^ heart heart heart heart heart


dark_vampiric_wolf
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Fri Mar 16, 2007 @ 12:36am


i love it it's really good
it's alot better than the
ones i've put up so far


Eamane Surion
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 @ 03:51am


that soooooo sweeet i love your poems


Drown426
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Tue Jan 22, 2008 @ 09:40pm


Your good!


Kanu22
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Mon Sep 22, 2008 @ 02:27am


That's an interesting poem... Though even if your loved dies, shouldn't you still go on to live life for the both of you?

@__@ Sorry. I think intothings too deeply.

Nice poem? There. Lol. That works. XD


User Comments: [10]
 
 
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