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well okay i made a journal whee
only thing i'm gonna at writing are novel-type stories
maybe i'll write little stories? confused
okay! i'll start with something like that mrgreen
here's something from a story i just recently started on:

she lay there on the ground, wondering
"what's the point?" she said to herself.
to her, everything lost it's meaning. her school grades were falliing, her only hobby was becoming a problem to her.
she had to reason to exist.
would anyone notice her when she left?
would anyone care?
her two friends would notice for sure, but will they care?
"why is this life so hard!?" she yelled, not at anyone in particular
"indeed." said a voice.
she immediately looked up at the direction where the voice came from.
it was the same guy who helped her yesterday, still wearing the same outfit, which she now noticed resembled a knight.
"your life shouldn't be easy though." he said.
she looked back down towards the ground.
"then... why even bother?" she responded
"bother with what?" he replied
a silence.
"...living." she said in a lower tone of voice.
"life is made for us to live." he said in a more serious voice.
"what reason do i have to live? i have nothing to live for."
"then find something to live for." he responded.
"but where... would i find something like that?" she said back.
"that you need to figure out on your own."
she stood up.
"but... this world, it seems to be getting worse." she said
"what makes you say that?" he asker her.
"everything that happens, war, crime, death!" she started yelling.
he went silent, he couldn't think of a response.
"sometimes... i wish i could just... leave this world behind." she said in a low tone.
"huh..." he said finally.
"huh?" she asked, wondering why he said that.
"do you want to?" he asked her.
"eh? want to.. what?"
"leave this world."
"i...um...yeah, i guess." she was confused now.
"well then, i should tell you who i am." he lost his serious tone.
she stood there, silent.
"my name is Keith, as you can see, i don't look like a person from this world." he said, referring to his outfit.
"you're... not from this world?"
"well, no. i came from a different world, not too different from this one."
she looked at him with a angry look.
"what if i don't believe you?" she said.
he let out a small laugh.
"well then.."
he walked towards the center of the field.
she followed wondering what it was he was going to show her.
after reaching the center of the field, he stopped.
"huh? why are we stopping here?" she asked him.
he pulled from a bag hanging on his side 3 round orbs, each one incredibly shiny and in a different color.
he placed them on the ground in a sort of triangle formation.
nothing happened.
"err.. what did you just do?" she said puzzled.
"well of course you can't see it." he said laughing.
he moved his arm forward over the orbs.
immediately as if reacting to his arm, the orbs were glowing brightly.
where he had his arm, it looked like some sort of portal, swirling in transparent colors.
"well now i should ask you, do you still want to leave?"
she didn't know what to say, what she just saw was unbelievable.
"well?"
"i... want to..."
he reached his other arm to her.
"well then, grab my arm."
she grabbed his arm with her hands.
the portal sucked them in.

neat story no?
title is "Hyrland" also the name of the "other" world
mrgreen mrgreen
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