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HURRAY THE FIRST CHAPTER! OF MY BOOK! U OVER DIS... TOPIA
U / Dis
Topia... Chapter 1


In this book there are many connections to the religion Christianity. For Christian and Catholic readers, I'm not telling you that you are wrong. I just thought that this book would be a lot better if I connected beliefs to a fictional story. So please have an open mind while reading and thank you for even looking at my story.


Chapter 1

In the midst of the second major was between Heaven and Hell, bloodshed ran as rivers down the streets of Neraiken, the second biggest city in all of Topia. I was a terrifying situation I was experiencing, it wasn't the pools of blood next to my feet nor the piles of body parts before my comrades. It was the mere sight of someone I've longed to wipe from existence. "The unstoppable" some people call him, or better yet "The taker of one thousand lives" but it wasn't different to how many names he had, for I only care for one... "Brother".

Those eyes, like weapons of there own, stabbing into my confidence. He was mocking me, insulting me on the battlefield. He was urging for a fight so I decided to give him one. My wings were not fully grown in so i was not that fast, but even so I flu to my brother at the fastest I could go. With my right hand I attempt to hook shot him in the face, I did so. Blood spewed everywhere, for sure by brother was pushed away from that attack, so I tried to relocate where he was. To my surprise, not a scratch on his face. Where did the blood come from then?... I looked down to find my hand broken and fingers askew. My ambition was to win at any cost. But it was too late, he had become yet a blur, only to reappear behind me too knock me out cold.

When I awoke, the city was in ruins and mobs of anarchy and chaos ran the streets. I stood up to fight the countless enemys ahead of me. But a dark portal covered my vision as I found myself at the resistance hideaway. "WHERE THE HELL WERE YOU CHRIS! YOU CAN'T GO RUNNING AROUND JUST KILLING PEOPLE! WE ARE A TEAM AND WE SHOULD FIGHT LIKE ONE!" said Bang our mage and gunman.
"Calm down I'm not hurt, I just went out for a walk" I said to relive Bang's anger.
"WHO IN THERE RIGHT ******** MIND GOES FOR A WALK IN THE FRONT LINE BATTLEFIELD!"
"Calm down, look I'm fine, I'm fine"
"it's just you know we cant lose you... your our key... Mr. Chris Treborn"
"ay no reason to be so formal"
"*sigh*"
"ay bang"
"yeah?"
"the next year is gunna be filled with countless fights you know."
"yeah I know"
"some we might not win"
"yeah I know"
"do you even remember when we got into this mess?"
"yeah 'bout 5 years ago..."



TO BE CONTINUED...





 
 
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