I wrote this in back '07 during english last year i added on an extra verse which I'll add in another journel after this. Comments of any kind are greatly appreciated just please instead of saying it's bad or it sucks give me an explanation why it's isn't good. Thank you.
Life is like a rose perfect in design, freely does it's petals grow, but danger comes with time.
Life is like a white rose, pure as pure can be, but can be stained so easily by the worlds monstrousities.
Life is like a glass rose a wonder to behold but can be shattered by the secrets that remain untold.
Life is like a wilted rose as nature did intend this is where we meet our once and final end.
A lot of my friends say it's pretty good, but I am still a novice hopefully i'll get better with time. Also as some extra fun try to guess what each verse relates to.
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