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Once when I was a young sailor, I was happily watching the deep blue sea. Then sudently I heard a beautifull melody. To apreciate the sound I step a lil bit closer to the gate of the boat ...and that's when I gazed upon her beauty...such a lovely creature...such gentle hands...I felt like the whip was the cause of her mystery, i'ts ice roots complemented her...And thats when I knew...I feel in love...not with a human...but with a mermaid...my mermaid!!!

Long ago, in the world of Gaia...an evil empire was rissing. The one who everyone feared..."The Darkened Soul" was taking over the world. Accourding to the legend, she had no hand, nor feet...she was just the darkness itself. Since she had no body, she had no voice, her dragon spoke for herself...and nobody could stop here!... well or so she tougth...

Title: The Kingdom Ruler
Score: 11.6769
Total Ratings: 5511
Total Comments: 107
Rank: 227
Comments you received

Galaxia-sama
Comment virginity taken. 3nodding

lil_naimi
O.o im sooooi scared!! >_<

Oo.Pandora.oO
Scary surprised

+-...MooMooBark...-+
surprised Wicked! <3 10/10

~=Dear-Chrono=~
Nice Avi! 10/10 !!

MODernist3
I think there's a bit too much to him, he looks a
bit too busy (it might just be my eye-sight :p).
But he's still rather cool. 9/10.

suns3tt
wow now that deserves a 10 so creative

Cruciarius
too much mythrill and has 2 g-blades... horrible.

Tres Iqus
it's scary but I still think you are very
sexy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kumiko Hoshi
OOHHH!!! i heart this avi... it looks evil but
good

Raging_Blazing_Fire7
cluttered, too many donation items doesn't
necessarily make it a good avi. the gwee doesn't
compliment it either. had it not been for the
story it would have been more useless clutter. not
a fan of mythril or the g blade, so i'm gonna give
you a 4.

KM1309
nice 10/10

[LordAlucard]
Nice. 10/10

xo_brokensoul
looks really cool 8/10

xXKerwynXx
so many donation items. T.T

Arka-Thoth
*so many donation items. T.T* -stupid
guy...10/10-;D

shadow kiwi9
10/10 i like it

[~Angel7~]
I like it, it's very cool! ^^

swordguy1991
cool avi

too191
great!!!!!!! love it

Angelboy777
super cool hermanita me gusto 10/10

Ruth Marie
wow...me guta me guta! 10!!

Okazumna
and 10!

[[angelicsolarflare]]
Great avi. I ♥ it. 10/10

St. Jimmy!
Woooooooooow, tu avatar esta realmente
lindooooooo!!! 10/10 *-* Felicitaciones n_n Y
me gusta la historia n_n Congratulations!

forgotten_dreams666
whoa

BLOODYGIRL_ON_FIRE
me like the avi and the story xd mano.. ya me
tenia mal la gente diciendote nene
stare 10/10 pa mi sis xd

HEYUKA
oh oh pero bueno 10/10 uh uh

mamahaha
crazily cool!!! dark and mysterious...

satans_servant
sweet

hentaiguy
lol love the weapong cape 8/10

r00t
Weird s**t... but it's ok. Good luck!

caft
cool....

Mc_twist69
Very cool. biggrin

kiba inuzuka akamaru
super awesome

kurama423
very nice i like te way you did it good workXD

Midnight Brown
cool avi and which kingdom do u rule?

KleinerWolf
great avi

Jason-Frost
cool

Jason-Frost
cool

LiMuZi2
very scary =)

majca
I am SO SICK of armor avis. 1 for
unoriginality.

applekore
Holy cow! Where to begin! I love it. Scary,
creative demonish. Good job! 10!

lilsimmie14
Great Job !

Quimera Boy
Te dejo un comentario, mucha suerte.

Quimera Boy
10/10

shadowfox62
kinda to much stuff 8

shadowfox62
kinda to much stuff 8

thegirlwithasword
busy. but I like it

twilight_beauty
its actually the only one i liek tthat has the
armor on it and i love ur story it makes me wanna
know more of the avi's background and i love to
think so yet im giving ua 10 congrats hope u
win!!!!!!!!!!!!!

coolguy_110
i say 10/10 perfect!

hanzy_mare
me encanta mia mor te di un 10/10 jejejeje te amo
muax

Shaka~Virgo
10

gangsta_blade
whats going on there? is that an avatar or did
somebody's crayons get left out in the hot sun?

Milhouse_Destroyer
Nice 10/10 dont know if i agree with the G Blades
though

Jinxy_Doll
They are all starting to look the same to me.

blackfire_cat01
WOAH!!!!thats cool very knighty looking! i like
it^^

B4dB0y
por esta chica yo no solo doy un 10/10 por ella
yo entrego todo mi corazon heart

bura-suka
good biggrin 10

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sizzlesoph_28
Cool Avi biggrin

Burgherr
bad... stare

gupalsmurthpadacal
Cool!

lovelifecauseitonlyhappen
10/10

ensom_mane
no

CrimsonPlasmaBeam
Wow! Cool avatar!

Aloria Neza
Kind of too cluttered and not everything looks
right. But it's still nice and I can tell you put
some thought into it due to the story- so nice
work.

loopylyndsey
9

smoky540
awesome avi

Luckk
it migth be bettre without the scarf. And the eyes
might have to be shown. But good. a 6 kinda
crowded. I crtic hard, so it's hard to get higher
than a 6 from me.

Nightmare4141
SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SasukeX00
awsome 10/10

Akaashi
very cool

Auron_of_light
I whant to rule the world....10/10

Julissa14
common

Roxas -13
cool i like it 10/10

animeprincess88
Little too cluttered XP 7/10

0o0Eulalia0o0
Too shiny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dreadloc
...wow....thatisawsome....good luck way to go

Aryess
You're about a nine. The Gwee looks kind of out of
place, but then again so does the CN Scarf.
Overall it looks good though. <3

Miz Quirky
Interesting. <3 10!

emmy_is_cool
nice

flyin_cows
woah... i think the armors abit too much

Charlemagne Hildebrandte
Nice Avi!!! 10/10

ThunderJetstreampwns
This evil tyrant is pwning the computer
screen......thats a good thing 10/10

Whitelighter-Wyatt
nice! very powerful looking! nicely done! 10/10

sixthstellestial
smile

Star U
i have one word and one word
only....... SEXY.

x_Darkest_Twilight_x
nice

[insert.witty.name]
not really for me

Etsuko Tsuruya
Weird.

999THE_OMEN_PROPHECIE666
Very creative I like it very ummmmm
kingdomy well i give u 10/10 cuz i rate everyone
10/10

KFK
Nice i really like it 10/10 If you have the time
plz come by and check my avi out Thnx XD

KuraiChiheisenTora
Love it.

tigrrlily512
Just a little busy- but no, wait! I can SEE!!!
That is good, and if ya separate the different
matching group of items from each other, this
looks FANTASTIC. Well done!

miss_sharpe
ott but good

sidney
a little messy good lyuck

NeneSan
ohhh, nice

SeaOtterLover52
way to much you need to cut down

Mrs. Natsuki Akimichi
umm its really cluttered

tashi masaharu
senn things liek this too much 1/10 unoriginal

faeriegodmother
9/10 It's pretty cool, and it must have cost a
lot of gold, but I think it's not that original.
Lots of people load their avatars with stuff like
that. Not that I don't like it. I think you have a
good chance of winning! That's why I'm giving you
a 9!

Gardien Of The Flame
cool etes ^^ how you made them?

Tsukanashi
coolness

Marker96
are those keyblades????O_o

Marker96
by the way where do u get them....they are sweet^^

Kiwee
I see hands and feet. O.o Huh?

I wrote this rigth now, I know it has no rythim...Its just thougths passing in my mind...Cause I am thinking of someone that I'll never have...



I am laying here...waiting here...

Trying to figure out my destiny.
Holding tigth, to those dreams.
I wish we could meet...I wish you could see...

How much your absence means to me.
I want to be the one you seek.
I want to be the one you need.
I want to be the one you sleep with...

If all of this and more where truth...I would be the happiest me I could be.

But, since all of this its just a dream.
A fantasy that can never be.
I'll just pretend, play in my head.
Playing that fake reality.
Thats how I survive...thats what I want.

I want your love, that I can't deny.

I want your trust, I want those lips.

I want to change the reason to live.
Cause all I see each day is your glow.

And when I look into my hands, I see and feel your presence, dear.
I kissed them and smile at them. While tears fall down my chest. My heart pounds wildly for you now. I hold on to that fake reality. Reviving the time where you loved me.

The time where you cared for me.
The time where you dared to be the only one for me.
But those times are long gone...now facing reality once more...

I am all alone, still waiting thougth...
Waiting for another spark... I still have hope.
I love you dearly thats for sure.

Now you shall see everything that happened in my first avatar arena ever!!:



Sadly I made a cute story but Gaia does not saves it and my computer is dead so I lost the cool story...yea I know it sucks sweatdrop

Title: The True lover!
Score: 7.5477
Total Ratings: 494
Total Comments: 35
Rank: 103

Comments received:

CM Soldier
1st comment.

benedikte
ur av is so cool i want those things too...

drowninglesons88
hmmm... id give you 9/10 i like how all the
colors match

saerii
wow! this is very cute ^_^ 10/10

Sharpie-kun
I like how you balanced your items, but maybe a
little more blue near the feet? I gave a 10
nonetheless. I REALLY like how you distributed the
equipment. =u=

lil_tokyomewmew
cute.

cherish05
nice....10/10

deepdeepdreamlesssleep
i like your description! its cool! i like your
avatar! a lot!
10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
00000000000000000/10

Pure_angel17
Thanks for the comments, now the coco kitty shall
lick you forever ^___^

anime_rock_vonswat
It's cute. Points for the little story ^^

Outcast Angel
You look like some kind of evil yet cute young
girl! (Probably becuase of the smile on your
face) Love it! smile

r00t
Nice nice avatar. 10/10

BLOODYGIRL_ON_FIRE
like the story love the avi 10/10 XD

BlueBerry100
very nice! i love your description! very detailed!
but you should've made the hair white... great
job!

the fourth champion
heart all your items

syazana
cool babe....i like it..=)

ralyt
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mamahaha
[b:fb18ee41b0] 10/10....
just simply
perfect.. [img:fb18ee41b0]http://i <br>mg97.imageshack.us/img97/9070/queenmintsmilies0127 <br>vx2ld.gif[/img:fb18ee41b0] [/b:fb18ee41b0][/color:fb18ee41b0][/size:fb18ee41b0][/align:fb18ee41b0]

mamahaha
heart smoking hot!!! heart

tail_blu
I like it

i_am_ryanne04
cool

axeldemyxfan
I love the look! I liked the story too. Very
interesting.

vcfm22
awesome! coolios! lol ^.^ --- nice combo of black
& blue

OXangeloflightXO
i LOVED your little story, the avi is also cute
10/10

Zakurosano
I love your story...*sniffs* 10/10

I_Love_The_Bunny
your are so cute!

manga luv
cute

cinnamon-baka
So cute. ^^ The cat totally 0wns! biggrin

[.a.]ngie
I lubb your avataar it's awesome!!!

JackMorris
oooh can i have ur skirt

LuBu69
indeed, true lover10/10

fire_babi_
ooo_OOO , me likee, i full 10/10

spongy82
wow that i so cool

the cool small dude
i love it!

the cool small dude
10/10!

stormyheart
yay^_^ I like yours best;p