So here is a little story of when i went on a little trip with my friends that turned into a big problem.
"Dude, hurry up we'll be late for the trip to 5 stars!" Tony yelled at us. ( lol pause so i didn't write the story so 5 star is the hotel in Hawaii. Back to the story.) We're at the hotel and its freaking huge and nice. "Let's go swimming!" Tony yelled (again -_-). "Tony we need to see who shares a room." I said. "Well there is only four of us" Carlos explains. "I'll choose who shares a room." I said. "wait what why do you get to choose?" Joey says. "Because I can." I said. After we choose the room with me and Carlos sharing and Tony and Joey sharing a room we went to change to go swimming. Oh did i mention Carlos is a crazy piece of poop who tears up for no reason my money. "CARLOS I'M GOING SWIMMING WITH TONY DON'T TOUCH MY MONEY WITH YOUR DIRTY HANDS" I screams at the top of my lungs " NO I WILL DO AS I WANT YOUR NOT MY MOM" Carlos screams back. Man I gotta hide it so I slowly walk in to the room we share and hide the money under my bed. After all the yelling and hiding I went swimming with Tony and Joey... I hope Carlos doesn't take my money or burn the hotel down. While i was swimming i heard screaming. Looking around I didn't see anything 'til I heard it again. "HELP HELP!" and when I looked i saw it was Tony and he was drowning. I went to go save him but i noticed he was in the shallow end of the pool( you know the part where there's on water at were the little kids play. Right?) so i left him there but, lucky him Joey was kind enough to save that idiot. After that stupid drowning we went home and that BAKA Carlos tore up my FING money. ( I'm going to kill him). After my little rampage I went to sleep from exhausted And on that night something strange happened. There was...was...moaning? Coming from Joey's and Tony's room. (o.O). I ran down to there room but i didn't get half-way down the hall before I heard two gun shots.(wow there into crazy stuff ;D). Then those two ran out screaming bloody murder and there was blood on Joey's face (uh huh blood .-.) " What happened in there. First, I hear moaning Then, I here gun shots Lastly, you guys run out screaming. What in the blue hell happened in there." I particularly yelled. " There was this guy or something I'm not sure but he it was chasing us". He explained. "So I shot it two times in the ches-. "YOU WHAT YOU BROUGHT A GUN ON THE TRIP WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!!"I yelled at him. Why would he bring a gun on a vacation. When I looked down the hall way... I don't even know what i saw... But i saw those... those THINGS there and I did what i thought was natural I shoved Tony to the ground and bucked it. I've never ran so fast in my life god I thought I was going to die. (What a way to do a friend. dontcha think? but were's Carlos during this?). I heard Tony be hide me breathing really hard along with Joey. "Why would you push me!" Tony screamed at me getting spit all over my upper lip. " It was a natural reaction." I whispered as i wiped the saliva off my face. "By the way where's Carlos at?" Joey asked. ( did he just read my mind or something? o.O).
"Dude, hurry up we'll be late for the trip to 5 stars!" Tony yelled at us. ( lol pause so i didn't write the story so 5 star is the hotel in Hawaii. Back to the story.) We're at the hotel and its freaking huge and nice. "Let's go swimming!" Tony yelled (again -_-). "Tony we need to see who shares a room." I said. "Well there is only four of us" Carlos explains. "I'll choose who shares a room." I said. "wait what why do you get to choose?" Joey says. "Because I can." I said. After we choose the room with me and Carlos sharing and Tony and Joey sharing a room we went to change to go swimming. Oh did i mention Carlos is a crazy piece of poop who tears up for no reason my money. "CARLOS I'M GOING SWIMMING WITH TONY DON'T TOUCH MY MONEY WITH YOUR DIRTY HANDS" I screams at the top of my lungs " NO I WILL DO AS I WANT YOUR NOT MY MOM" Carlos screams back. Man I gotta hide it so I slowly walk in to the room we share and hide the money under my bed. After all the yelling and hiding I went swimming with Tony and Joey... I hope Carlos doesn't take my money or burn the hotel down. While i was swimming i heard screaming. Looking around I didn't see anything 'til I heard it again. "HELP HELP!" and when I looked i saw it was Tony and he was drowning. I went to go save him but i noticed he was in the shallow end of the pool( you know the part where there's on water at were the little kids play. Right?) so i left him there but, lucky him Joey was kind enough to save that idiot. After that stupid drowning we went home and that BAKA Carlos tore up my FING money. ( I'm going to kill him). After my little rampage I went to sleep from exhausted And on that night something strange happened. There was...was...moaning? Coming from Joey's and Tony's room. (o.O). I ran down to there room but i didn't get half-way down the hall before I heard two gun shots.(wow there into crazy stuff ;D). Then those two ran out screaming bloody murder and there was blood on Joey's face (uh huh blood .-.) " What happened in there. First, I hear moaning Then, I here gun shots Lastly, you guys run out screaming. What in the blue hell happened in there." I particularly yelled. " There was this guy or something I'm not sure but he it was chasing us". He explained. "So I shot it two times in the ches-. "YOU WHAT YOU BROUGHT A GUN ON THE TRIP WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!!"I yelled at him. Why would he bring a gun on a vacation. When I looked down the hall way... I don't even know what i saw... But i saw those... those THINGS there and I did what i thought was natural I shoved Tony to the ground and bucked it. I've never ran so fast in my life god I thought I was going to die. (What a way to do a friend. dontcha think? but were's Carlos during this?). I heard Tony be hide me breathing really hard along with Joey. "Why would you push me!" Tony screamed at me getting spit all over my upper lip. " It was a natural reaction." I whispered as i wiped the saliva off my face. "By the way where's Carlos at?" Joey asked. ( did he just read my mind or something? o.O).
So this is the first chapter of mine and my brothers story
should we continue or just stop?