[align=center]Here is how this is going to work. My Writing is going to be in green and Haley's will be in blue. This way they are much easier to tell who the writer is.
Comments appreciated. UNEDITED ... Because now you can see the difference between ours.
Damon stood completely still. He feared his master would do things that are worse then living to him. His bare pale body held upright,arms chained to the cold cement wall in front of him. His deep red eyes glared at the chains coldly. He should have known better. Damon's soft black wings twitched suddenly and he turned his head to see Mephistopheles standing there, gaping at the handsome boy.
"See you tomorrow Jenny" Lea called as she briskly walked out the door of Wal-mart It was late, around 9:00. When she got to her red van, she thought she heard footsteps but it could have been anybody. She whirled around hoping to see anyone but nothing, no one. She fumbled with her keys and stuck them in the van door thats when she felt th searing pain in between her shoulder blades.
'Damon your one of the oldest demon's still walking! Keep your reputation alive goddammit!' Damon thought to himslef. Damon turned his head to face the wall. He heard the soft clacking noise as Mephistopheles walked ever closer to him. Damon started to panic a little. His train of thought, mostly filled of panic, was broken when Damon heard the clacking stop. A new sound filled the room. The whistling of Mephistopheles' favorite whip, Redwing. Damon squeezed his eyes shut and the whip cracked. Samon's eyes shot open. His mouth opened and let out a blood curtling cry. Resounding pain shot up Damon's back as he heard droplets of his blood fall to the ground. Damon's eyes burned red and he thought to himself, 'I refuse to withstand this any longer.' and pulled himself up suddenly. Damon's remaining strength astounded him as he turned and hurled himself at the horrible man now standing in front of him.
Lea woke up to an awful smell.
"Ughhh where am I" she asked out loud, but no one seemed to hear her.
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Within the illusions hide real illusions... From the real illusions, the illusions are created. Within the truth hides the lie, within the lie hides the truth.
Rokudo Mukuro... <3
Rokudo Mukuro... <3