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Hey guys and gals. I need some opinions. I've got a lot of story ideas. Tell me what you think of each.
Currently, Im working on Crimson Love. Its about me and a wolf. We fall in love. Yadda yadda. Just an awesome sappy love story^^
Next I wanna try a sexy, action, romance or something like that. Really sexy tho lol.
First I have a character named Madoxx. She is 21, female, and lives in the deep dark streets of New York City. She's a crazy girl. Full of spirit, spunk, and total virginity!! stare This is her quest. She doesn't want to be a virgin anymore but the only problem is..well #1: her twin brother Xavier. He is an overly protective guy but yet also a ladies man. He lost his virginity at 17. Wow wee. Ok. Heres problem #2 is this...she is part of a secret service to protect the city from evil creatures and beyond or otherwise known as ECBS(Evil Creatures and Beyond Service) stare Everyday, she faces life and death situations and kills at least 10 a day. Her brother kills maybe 2..since the ladies are more important.
Madoxx wants kids but yet she doesn't want to raise one in this horrible, God forsaken world and while she's' doing this job. After she is about to finally retire and settle down..a new foe shows himself. twisted His name is "Barbed Wire". He was a horrible, evil, wolf that lived in the early 1900's. When he was a pup, him and his sister were playing in the small, not deep, river. As they horseplayed, Barbed Wire had a regular name but I just cant think of one yet, his sister Emma tripped and her head fell in the water. BW thought it was a game and pushed his puppy paws on top of her head. Watching her struggle ands still thinking it was a game, he pushed down harder, not realizing what he was actually doin. After a while he noticed that she stopped moving and her body went still. He removed his paws and his face filled with horror. He just killed his sister.
The rest of the pack rejected him completely, saying he was a murderer and a puppy killer. The pack wanted to exile him but his mother, Rea, fought for her only child. She knew it was an accident and didn't care what the rest of the pact thought. (wow. Im writing out the whole damn story right now^^) The pact continued there torment. Attacking, teasing, and scaring him for life. More than 13 scars now covered his puppy body. Eventually, his sorrow turned to terror. Terror turned to hate. Hate turned into madness. By the age of 3, dont know the name yet, killed his own mother and everyone else in the pack, leaving only the alpha male, Dagger. Dagger snarled and tried driving dont know his name yet away. Dont know his name yet accidentally ran into a barbed wire fence and the more he struggled to get free the more it drove into his flesh. Some even went all the way though his muscle, bones and all. With his dying breath he smiled coldly and said this with an evil mad grin. "I..may be dying now..but hear this..I will return..I will find re....revenge. Not on you..no...in the future...your next generation...your first...first daughter...her soul will be mine...I will use....the very..god forsaken wire you destroyed me with! You will.....you will find death old man! Death...." With his last breath, he died with that same cold and evil grin. Eyes were open with cold delight. Dagger knew..this curse was to in fact live on forever. His family..his entire generation...would feel "Barbed Wire's" Wrath.. eek
Yeh, Im liking this so far^^ What do you guys think. Madoxx will maybe finally find a man or something but oh yeh..she will defiantly meet Barbed Wire. I'll be drawing a picture soon of him^^ In my fan art is a picture of Madoxx but I need to fix a few things. Im gonna start writing this story right now^^ What should I call it? Any suggestions? P.S. Did I mention she has a wolf side^^ Yup, half wolf^^ awesome! heart whee xp sweatdrop blaugh