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The Brave Boy Who Survive in Wrong Time.
i wrote the story. I make it up, also please check my sentence, and please comment! ;D
On the next months later, a teen boy works so hard at his car repair and he earning several good moneys. He fiddling with the broken exhaust, and the man approaching at his side. "Hello Zach, did someone messing up the exhaust again?" The man asks. "I dunno Jeff, " Zach say with bored tone. Jeff stare at him with concerned face. "What wrong with you? You seems mad at something?" Jeff asks.
"its nothing really, and its is not important," Zach explains. "Oh, i see," Jeff say as a Zach replaces the broken exhaust for a new exhaust.

After his repairing job get done, Zach drive his black Scion xA to his girlfriend; Jenna, She want go to movie with Zach. He parking next to the curb, and he get out of his car. He is standing close to the door. His finger presses the doorbell and the sounds behind the white door. He waiting patiently and presses the door bell for a second try, but nothing responds to the doorbell. He tiptoes to see through the window of a door. The lights flicking with warmly shines and his face become more suspicious as he decides to walking a different way around her home. The lights were still glowing.The back doors are slightly open and creaking slowly. Zach enters the back door and kitchen. His heartbeat grows rapidly. What happen to her and something eerie around him. He searching through the living room, dining room, and basement, still Jenna is nowhere to find. So he realizes Jenna must be in upstairs and he rush into stairs. He pushing each doors, Bathrooms, and master room. The last door at far edge of the hallway. His hand reaches the doorknob. His heartbeat beating rapidly and starting a sweating.Is she ok? He turn the doorknob and opening slowly.The door creaking awfully, as he enters her room. He froze with fear, his body starting to shaking and his eyes wide with terrible.





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