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BloodofBlackRoses' Stories and Poems! ^-^

I'm mainly going to put the poems and stories I have written in here. You can comment and let me know what you think about them. I'd really like to know what you think about my poems. ^-^

BloodofBlackRoses
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 04:24pm

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	I Thought That I Loved You I thought that I loved you, But I don't know anymore. I haven't known what to do, I was lost and I shut the door. The door to my heart, What do you want me to be? I feel like it's been torn apart, I guess I can no longer see. Things have gone terribly wrong, I wish I could take it all back. I can hear that same, sad song, But forgiveness is what people lack. I shut the door, The door to my soul. I wanted more, But I'm no longer whole. I have shut the door to my heart, My friends have seen me cry. I'm lost and torn apart, I feel like I should just die.

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demon9406
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Tue Jun 05, 2007 @ 08:05pm

i think that you use different amount of sylables which makes it sound kinda weird but besides that htey are very good poems

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