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BloodofBlackRoses' Stories and Poems! ^-^ I'm mainly going to put the poems and stories I have written in here. You can comment and let me know what you think about them. I'd really like to know what you think about my poems. ^-^


BloodofBlackRoses
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Every Beat of My Heart
I love you with every beat of my heart,
I really believed that we were meant to be.
You just ripped it out and tore it apart,
I guess that I could never see.
You don't realize how much I still love you,
If only I could erase this pain.
I'm not sure what I'm going to do,
I can't help but love the rain.
When it rains, I'm not as sad,
It feels like its been so long.
I don't like to get mad,
I remember that same, sad song.
I told you I loved you,
I meant it every day.
I still care about you too,
I guess I just wanted to say:
I'm falling apart at the seems,
I love you with every beat of my heart.
I guess these feelings were just dreams,
You just ripped it out and tore it apart.






User Comments: [3]
tonyspace101
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Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 06:49pm


oh my god that poem really stands out you should make more like that biggrin


Tony
demon9406
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Tue Jun 05, 2007 @ 08:03pm


its pretty good but theres just something about it that doesnt click i give it 7/10


Kaos Umecca
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Tue Aug 12, 2008 @ 08:36pm


Hi. I liked all of your poems. They relly are good. I myself write poems but I don't think them any good. But you should write more. I liked them.


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