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Marluxia Oblivion's Crazy Gaia Thoughts
Hiya ppl! I'm Marluxia Oblivion! The crazy, and insane manga artist/fan is here on Gaia Online and my journal is nothing normal. LOL!=p Anyway, my journal is going to be filled with short stories and manga stories I write/wrote about. So, enjoy! MEOW
Blood Rayne! continuing the story!!
HI PPL!!!!! srry i havent been riteing in the journal l8ly. so heres more of Blood Rayne( just until i fix Arcane Magi sweatdrop )
Chapter 1: If the Lock Opens......
...............Fifteen years later.............
"Alice. Alice, please wake up."
"Ugh! Five more minutes!!!!!!"
Alice rolled over on her bed. A tall, blonde woman wearing a blue church dress sighed.
" Ever since we found Alice when she was two, she was a darling little girl. Now she's becoming a pain in the neck," she said. This is Alice's adoptive mother, nadia Highwind. She walked into the kitchen. " Dear, don't say such harsh things. You thought Alice was a blessing when we found her." Nadia turned around. A tall man with brown-blonde hair and wearing a black priest outfit hugged her. This is Alice's adoptive father, Tyran Highwind. Nadia sighed. " I know Tyran," she said." Strangly, the only thing Alice knew when we found her was her name. And nothing else." Tyran smiled. " Well, let's just let Alice get up on her own," he said." Besides, we need to go right now or Clara is fearfully going to have a fit." Nadia nodded. " Alice," she said."If you ever get up, please do your chores." As they were leaving, they saw a small box on their doorstep. It was a black box, decorated in small red and black striped ribbons. There was a spider shaped lock on it. "What is this?" Nadia asked. Tyran picked it up." I have no certain clue," he said. He put it on a desk. " Nadia, let's just leave it until later." The two of them left.
"Ugh! Mother?...Father?"
A young girl with red and black hair, which was put back in black frilled ribbons, walked down the stairs. "maybe they already left," she sighed. Suddenly, she spotted the box. The box began to rattle and shake. Alice jumped back. The box began to growl with a deep roar. Alice cautiously approched the box. " What the heck is in here?!?!?" she yelled. A low moan came from the box. Alice looked at the lock. " A spider?" she said. She searched in her pockets and pulled out a spider-shaped necklace. " I wonder...." she said. Alice put the necklace into the lock and turned it once right. Suddenly, the lock began to move left and the four locks holding it together came undone! Alice looked into the box.



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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 04, 2007 @ 03:06am
Nice entry! 3nodding Once again, I have to say that you are really really good with dialogue! wink I can't wait to see what happens next! It was a nice ending to the entry too.


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