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Hiya ppl! I'm Marluxia Oblivion! The crazy, and insane manga artist/fan is here on Gaia Online and my journal is nothing normal. LOL!=p Anyway, my journal is going to be filled with short stories and manga stories I write/wrote about. So, enjoy! MEOW
Hiya ppl! and for the first readers, Welcome to the world of Blood Rayne!
Chapter 2: Cross the living rag doll
Cross nodded. "Yep," he replied." So, I guess you don't remember anything about Eden Demonica?"
She shook her head. Cross sighed. " Wait!" he said, suddenly." If you're okay, then where is your brother?!" Alice looked confused. " My brother?" she asked. " I never had a brother." Cross smilied very sadly. " Ah," he said." Sorry, I forgot that you forgot about anything related to Eden Demonica." Suddenly, a rather small person came from one of Cross's pockets. It had the same look as Cross, but reminded Alice of Lock. The small doll looked up at Cross. " Cross, you have heard of holes in your dead-whatever zombie kind of pants," it said. " I mean, no, you don't have to be considerate to the people in your pocket!!!!" Lock's eyes lit up and she ran down and chased the other doll. " CHAIN!!!!" she yelled. " YOU'RE HERE!!YOU'RE HERE!!!!" Alice looked down as Lock and 'Chain' ran around in circles. Lock jumped on the other doll. " GET OFF OF ME, YOU VILE GIRL!" he yelled. Lock squeezed Chain harder. Cross sighed. " So...that's your doll...Alice?" he asked.
"Uh...ya," she said.
" So...what's her name again?"
" Lock. But, do you know who made her?"
Cross stopped. " Alice..," he said. " That's none of your concern. Believe me."
Alice stared at cross. " Well, if that person sent me Lock, then I believe I have a right to know about who created her!" Alice said, annoyed. Cross stared at her. Lock let go of Chain and climbed on Alice's bed.

Somethings wrong with Cross. Read the next part of Blood Rayne Ch.2 to find out!






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 01:53am
I loved the entry!!!! You're really talented at creating believable dialogue and I liked how you added the part about why she couldn't remember her brother. This was really great and I hope you add the next part soon! whee


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