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Hiya ppl! I'm Marluxia Oblivion! The crazy, and insane manga artist/fan is here on Gaia Online and my journal is nothing normal. LOL!=p Anyway, my journal is going to be filled with short stories and manga stories I write/wrote about. So, enjoy! MEOW
Blood Rayne: Chapter 2
YAY! Chapter 2 of Blood Rayne!
Chapter 2: Cross, the living rag doll
A sudden noise woke up Alice. " Who's out there?" she asked, walking toward the window. She peered into the darkness and fog surrounding her house.
" PRINCESS ALICE?!?! Oh god, thank heavens you're alright!"
Suddenly, a young boy with black hair, green tips and stitches across his face came through the window and hugged Alice with such strengh. Alice screamed. The boy stopped. " Uh...Alice?" he asked, putting his hand on her head." Are you feeling alright? Don't you remember me?" She stared at him in fright. The boy's eyes met her's. "Oh. I get it," he said. " Sorry for disturbing you Miss Grave." He bowed and was taking his leave. Alice stared at the ground.
"Naa! CROSS!!"
Lock ran off the bed and jumped on the boy. "Cross?" Alice asked, confused."Do you know him?"
Lock nodded. " Yep. He's actually one of your old friends, Alice,"Lock said. Alice stared at her." He's one of my old friends?" she asked. Lock nodded. " Alice," Cross said," I'm so happy that you're okay. Believe me, the folks back at Eden Demonica were worried sick about you. in fact, they all started to lose their very heads over the situation." Cross started laughing. Alice just stared at Cross. " So," she said." Back in Eden Demonica or what not, am I a commoner?" Cross started to laugh harder. "Uh...Alice," he said." If I called you 'Princess Alice', then what does that mean?" Alice looked at the ground, then gasped. " You mean that I'm a princess!?!?" she said.






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 27, 2007 @ 05:25am
Wow, that took me by surprise!!! I liked the way you showed him coming into the scene and then how she was surprised by what he told her! eek I hope you keep writing more chapters!!!! and tell me when you post the next! ^^


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