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Chapter #1 - Epilogue
I decided to make a story... here it goes lol...


In a jungle far hidden from the society... a boy shows up. He is making way through the plants and all of the sudden he stops. He stares, when he discovers the ancient ruins he was looking for for so long...

He makes his way to what seems to be the entrance of the ruins. Accordlingly to the rumors, every adventure that had found this ruins ended up coming back with nothing or not even coming back... He sees a door, ancient stile. He starts looking for a switch to open it, but in vain...

Boy:Geez, I'll never be able to get in...
Voice: Touch the stone to your left.
Boy:*Jumps from surprise* Who's there?
Voice: ...

He gets no answer. Trying to touch the mentioned stone, however, resulted in the ruins shaking up and down and the door opened.

Boy: Ok, this is it, can't go back now.

He enters it. Its pitch dark inside. Even so, he walks in without fear. All of the sudden the boy stops. "I'm feeling it" thinks the boy "I'm feeling It's presence...".

Voice: So you finally came, interesting boy.
Boy: So, you find me interesting... but I bet I find more interest in you then you in me.
Voice: I guess you already know who I am.
Boy: The spirit of the legendary dark crystal. And i guess you know why I came.
Voice: To get the powers of the dark crystal. But it's not that easy.
Boy: I thought it wouldn't be easy. So tell me, what do I have to do?
Voice: I'll make a singel question. If the answer pleases me, the crystal is yours. If not... your life is mine.
Boy: It's a deal then. Tell me the question.
Voice: Why you seek the power of the crystal?
Boy: ... To change this world. I'm sick of the world the way it is right now. I want to change it. But to change something you need power... and so i quested for the legendary crystals... luckly i found my way to the dark crystal. So why I want it? Cause I want power.

The noise of silence stays for a long time in the air. The boy stares calmly into the dark atmosphere around.

Voice: Well then...

The ruins starts to shake.

Voice: I shall grant you... the power you always dreamed of... the power of the dark crystal!

A crystal, as dark as nothing the boy ever seen, popped up from the thin air. The boy touches it. The ruins shake even more. The boy starts his morphing into a new being: muscles rip off his shirt, his hair grows wildly, theres a flow of energy around him.

Voice: Well, I just have one more question. What is your name, young one?

Dark wings grow from the boy's back.

Boy: My name... *eyes turn red* ... is Serge.






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Xx_Cybershot_xX
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 09, 2007 @ 08:42am
Please make comments, this is my first story, I never made anything like that, so I need comments, please make nice and constructive comments, point me my errors and remember, I'm not english, so theres a few things I couldn't say because I didn't knew the right word, and i may have made some errors.

Btw the story is unnamed because I don't have a name for it yet.


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 10, 2007 @ 12:04am
i liked it pretty much



Tear_Grants
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Julisi
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 31, 2007 @ 05:11am
wow bro your story is really good. pst dont forget to add Maira *smiles big*


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 25, 2007 @ 09:52pm
aww its cuteee heart heart


Forever & ever babii
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Eimmii
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Vampiress Jenna
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commentCommented on: Wed Feb 20, 2008 @ 02:36am
That's good. Be sure to make more dude.


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