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Phantom Black butterflies gather Red stained metal Glowing red eyes benieth wild black hair Locked in his stare Curling Frail memories Of friends now enemies Creeping black smoke Purple sky GOODBYE Purple black flowers Out of reach white towers I want to take it back Three drops of rain Cracked lips cold and dry GOODBYE Deep black feathers dance to the earth a women's cry GOODBYE GOODBYE GOODBYE

Posted by: Dark Moon Princess Sun Dec 16, 2007 @ 05:50am

"I've crossed oceans of time for you."[/align:8099456112]

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Commented on: Tue Dec 18, 2007 @ 02:54am


	I really like this one, Sunny. The mix of rhyming and free-verse is actually a rather good structure for the poem, rather than awkward like you might normally expect. I also liked the various images, such as "three drops of rain"<---really like that one. The repetition of "GOODBYE" adds finality to it. So....yes: very nice :]

Commented on: Wed Dec 19, 2007 @ 09:56pm


	Thank you. ^.^ If I ever commit suicide this is going to be my suicide note. So yeah. ^.^

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Commented on: Mon Dec 31, 2007 @ 07:52am


	Don't say things like that! You'd never be able to commit suicide--I'd get in your way by smacking the stupid notion out of you mad heart

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