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10-04-07
English 9A
Period 5
Note: Raven’s sword is based on an actual sword on page 3 under side topic “swords” of this website- home.att.net/~steven.licata/links.html

When the Bad Guy Wins

Everyone knows that the good guy doesn’t always win. Everyone knows that life doesn’t always go as planned. How come there aren’t any books about how the bad guy’s really work. Well, you’re about to read a story that is in the eyes of the one chosen to be the greatest warrior of all time… But what happens next?

Raven sat in her desk at school a fourteen year old girl, her pencil between her fingers, tapping rapidly against her desk. She was staring down at a note she had found in her locker, not forty-five minutes ago.
‘Meet me at the park… 5:45… No sooner, no later!’ It had said. The blue ink on the paper was written neatly. Too neatly to be written by a stereotypical boy of her age. In the background, Raven’s teacher, Mr. Pritou, blabbered on continuously about today’s homework assignment of neurons and genetics, in which Raven was so generously neglecting. The bell signaling the class was over soon rang. Raven’s classmates sprang to life around her. Raven stayed behind for a few seconds, and then walked out silently. Mr. Pritou’s eyes following her out then quickly going back to the work on his desk.
Raven went through the rest of her classes like any other day at school. She normally sat alone in the classes when she was aloud to do so. Her whole school was a popularity contest, and the so called “preps” always won. Raven didn’t care either way, as long as she wasn’t part of it.
When the last bell of the day rang, and the students around Raven ran for freedom, Raven walked slowly to her locker. She grabbed her books and placed them into her briefcase style bag. Raven walked home quickly after that, checking the time on her watch constantly. When she reached her home she walked in and walked straight to her room. It was 4:15. She set her alarm clock for 5:30 and laid down on her bed for a nap.
Raven walked slowly down the sidewalk to the park near her home. She would have to be slow enough to not get there early… 5:42… Raven sat down for a while to pass the time. When she felt ready to leave she stood up and sighed before walking the rest if the way to the park. She reached the gates and not two seconds later heard a loud beeping noise. She stopped walking and looked around... Nothing…
‘What is going on?’ Thought Raven. Raven’s heard a noise in the opposite direction and
her head spun towards it. She almost jumped when she saw a boy, no older then she, standing in front of her. “You’re more beautiful then they said you were.” The boy said.
Now, Raven has green eyes with a blonde bob cut hairstyle, She isn’t of the skinny type, She isn’t of the fat type. The boy… Raven thought she was in heaven when she saw him. The boy had black shaggy long hair and the skinniest body. There was one thing about him that freaked her out. He had red eyes…! “W…Who are you?” Raven stuttered out. The boy’s facial expression did not change at all. He merely walked closer to Raven and said, “My name is Xavier. That is just about the most anybody knows about me. I look about fifteen; to be precise I am exactly one hundred and five.” Xavier looked away then back, he started to speak again. “And I’ve come to take you away from this so called ‘real world’, and into the world you belong in. Whether you believe me or not, I am taking you there, I will train you… And you will be what you were born to be…” Xavier’s red eyes were watching her continuously. Raven heaved a heavy sigh and looked away to the side. When she looked back she said. “And what exactly was I born to be?” Xavier’s lip now curled into a sly smile. “Do you really think you can handle it?” Raven looked at him determinedly? “Karasu ‘Kira-za Dosumaru… Your name is the future that lies ahead for you.” Xavier said. When he was done talking he turned around and faded away, then everything around Raven faded. She found herself falling into a pit of darkness where she was continuously screaming the words ‘I REFUSE!’ Raven landed on her bed where she fell unconscious.

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