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My poetry
I don’t know what it is, but I had a poetic spark read my poetry and enjoy ^_^



What Defines a Man?

If you think I am less a man for writing poems,
Back off ill love take you on, always itching for a fight but only in self defense,
I am strong and independent and will not let any one stand in my way,
Hide you emotion and man up they say,
Not to express your feelings is craven,
A man should protect his family,
A man should love and respect his wife as his life,
Does not pray on the innocent,
He should protect the weak,
and stays true to his word,
This is what defines a man.


“There’s nothing to live for is you have nothing to die for.”

The broken heart

Cut me deep and bleed me dry,
Watch me suffer as I cry,
Watch me bleed as I slowly die,

My heart is an empty shell,
Which knows not bounds,
Watch me scream and make no sound
Watch me sink as I drown,

Your bitter words have hollowed out my soul
Your lack of love has taken its toll
Your rejection has left me in great toil,
That which I loved has been stolen,
And for this I can never truly be golden.

"only God could heal such pain"

Fear

A state of constant worry,
A state of distress and dismay,
You trust your life in another’s hands,
Your fear the day the walk away,
You fear the unknown,
Your fear the hurt,
You fear the pain,
You fear the dark,
Your fear the day,
When they leave you,
Bitter, broken, and betrayed,
Your fears will slowly eat you away.

"so you best deal with your fears quickly"

Toy

I am not your puppet,
I have no stings,
I am not you toy to control and manipulate,
I am not you play thing for your personal amusement,
I am a human being with feelings and emotions,
Control is not a good thing,
We should love and respect one another,
Control is for those who don’t trust,
Control is for those who are insecure,
I have a free will and I'll do as I damn well please!
If I choose to love you or if I choose to hate you,
Your lack of control will drive you mad,
Attack me with gilt,
Attack me with pain,
But this just means you never truly loved me.

“moral of this poem, don’t be controlling in a relationship a relationship should be built upon trust and support, love and understanding, respect not control, honor and honesty”

My love

I love thee more than the summers light,
I love thee more than the darkest night,
Thy eyes are as the skies,
Thy lips are like wine,
Thy hair smells of the sea,
Thy skin fair and smooth,
I love thee with all my heart.
What must I do to declare my love to thee,
Ohh fair and lovely lady!
What willt thou have me do?

Take it!

Take it all if that is what makes you happy,
I offer my flesh for you to devour,
I offer you my sole to defile,
I offer you my heart to dislodge,
I offer you my mind to desecrate,
I offer you myself to discover.
……..

Snow

The moon in the sky gives off a brilliant light,
The snow upon the ground sparkles like many diamonds,
Vast dunes of glowing ice,
Freezing cold, biting air,
But still a pleasant glare,

My peaceful place

“Close your eyes and think of a peaceful place to temporarily melt you worries a way”

Sitting upon smooth round moss covered rock,
In the middle of a steamy hot spring,
In the middle of a great forest by a gentle waterfall,
Many trees so green and tall,
Listen to the wind blow through their leaves,
Hear Birds sing welcoming praises,
Feel the warmth of the sun upon your face,
Feel the wind gently kiss your cheek,
I am at a perfect peace.

The love we share

When we are together we feel safe,
A loving warm embrace,
Our heads side by side,
Our lips quiver before they meet,
Our bodies intertwined,
Our paths have crossed ore soles have mingled,
Pick the fruit of thine lovers vine,
We are as one person,
So complete,
One could not survive without the other,
When we share something intimate,
It is special and not just another physical act,
A man and a woman what else could be more right?
we share a love so perfect that it gives us flight,

A Rose

A rose so radiant and red,
Beautiful and attractive,
Yet beauty and danger are in the same,
Come to close and its thorns will make you bleed,
Beautiful and just,
You have to hold it delicately to avoid the danger,
You have to treat it with love to preserve its beauty,

Pain

Pain is as a ferrous fire fueled by hate and rage.
Pain is like a void that runs deep.
I hate this horrid day.
I fee like I need to kneel and pray.
Constant longings and endless sorrow.
I do not want to live to see tomorrow.
Make it go away I do not want to see the light of day.
I want to stay locked up inside till May.
All emotion gone and tears so dry.
This pain makes me want to die.
It feels like something inside me died,
It sounds like a grieving widow who had just cried.
It smells like something that had just died.
It looks like an empty vase.
It tastes bitter at the base.
I think I’m going to be sick.
Oh, God make it go away.
I do not want to live to see another day.
Crying and holding myself.
I feel so alone in a sold cold world.
Like no one cares or gives a crap.
I hold something and don’t let go.
I can’t sleep because my pillow is all wet.
My head hurts, my face is red.
I look like iv been beaten over the head.
How this pain makes me wish I was dead.
So sad I want someone to hold me.
So mad I need someone to know me.
I am sad today I don’t know why.
Feel lazy and don’t feel like doing much of anything.
In My heart there is a constant longing, it keeps prolonging.
Like something’s missing, a void that runs deep.
I want to cry but cant find the tears.
Some days everything in me just dies.
A loss of faith in life or random depression.
I don’t know what this is or when it will pass,
all I know is that i should leave these feeling in the past,
I am but one in a sea of faces, loosing my self in random places.
Pain, dark, empty, and no warmth.
A void of constant longings, crying bloody tears.
Bitter, cold, and constant sorrow.
I don’t want to live to see tomorrow.

The peom to my love

As we loose ourselves in each others eyes,
The world melts away,
And all our troubles fade,
Lean in for a kiss,
So passionate and right,
You lay your head upon my breast,
And I hold you tight,
We lay upon the water,
The current so claming,
The sky is painted with many bright shining stars,
The moon so full and laminated,
Not a cloud in sight,
The water is as a mirror,
Reflecting the perfect night sky,
It is as we are floating in endless skies,
The inseparable love that we share is a perfect love,
So passionate and right,
I love you with all my heart,
Thoughs of you run through my minde every night.

I Can’t See

I cant see my sight is as the dark.
It is like im running blindfolded
Stumbling blindly in the dark wondering where I have left my mark
Nothing but blackness and emptiness
I feel my way to the wall, and it said hello
Scared i find a hole and fall
I tumble rolling in every direction
Just to to find myself bent, busted, broken, and bashed
I cry out in pain, where has my sight went
I start to see a blurry light.
And wake up on the floor in fright
Just to fined I had been sleeping.

Love

Love is like the color red
It is sweet as chocolate tasty and sweet
A dove is often associated with love
As red radiant rose is a symbol of love
You kiss me I feel like flying
You hold me I feel like sighing
I think I caught the love bug
When your with me I feel safe.
And no one can tear us apart
You make my heart start

Happyness

Diving, dipping, dancing, love
These are the few things that bring me happiness
I feel like doing summersaults all day.
I wish I could feel like this till may
Happiness is as a clown
Its like a joyful sound
Its yellow and so bright, you will loose your sight
I want to scream with all my might
Even a loud cloud could not bring me down
I am in the best mood, but now I think I want some food
Diving ,dipping, dancing love.
These are the few things that bring me happiness.

A life

You and I so in love,
All around us is a dark and empty place,
But within us is this light,
That makes the darkness fade,
Yet learking in the shadows is a thief,
His red eyes so envious,
His greed so great,
He is the master manipulator,
Trying to put and end to all good things,
Trying to destroy this great love,
He causes grief he causes strife,
He causes confusion he causes pain.
He is the end of all good things.

Passion

To live without passion or love,
Would not to have lived at all,
Passion the force that drives you,
Passion the hope for all things,
Passion the greatest love for another,
Passion and love go hand in hand,
Passion and love in perfect harmony,
Together they are called compassion,
Compassion does not laugh at the poor,
Compassion loves unconditional.

Jealousy and rage

Jealousy green and smells of rotten egg,
Bitter is always envious never satisfied,
And this leads to rage,
Rage red and spiteful,
Rage dead and hatful,
Aggressive and firesome,
You taste the blood upon you tong,
You feel nothing but pure hate,
You dont not care if you live or die,
When the two monsters,
rage and jealousy meet,

MY touch

I touch you,
You cry,
I love you,
You cry,
I hold you,
You cry,
I ask why you cry and you reply,
“I am finally happy”
I feel safe in you arms,
You care for me like no other,
You always came through for me,
You took away the pain,
You took away the stress,
You took away the guilt,
You took away the shame,
And I truly love you with all my heart,
You complete me,
And I feel there is no way to repay you,
And I reply, there is no need to repay me,
For I love you and you love me,
And that’s all I really care about.

“A virtuous woman exceeds the price of rubies”

Lion hearted

Pure,
Strong,
Brave,
Bold,
And enduring,
Loving,
Longing,
Waiting,
Never lusting,

What you do to me

Oh how I long to see you face.
I love you more than the air I breathe.
I am yours to hold and you are mine.
Long for the warmth of you skin upon mine.
I will protect you and hold you close.
My love last longer than the sands of time.
To loose you would be like loosing a piece of my heat.
A piece I traveled so far to find.
No distance great enough.
No ocean deep enough.
No mountain high enough.
could stop my undying love for you.
My heat beats faster when I hear you vioce.
A loss of breath overcomes me.
And you beauty overwhelms me.


~please tell me if you have a favorite~






User Comments: [3]
CountryRox123
Community Member





Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 05:35am


The My Love poem was my favorite. 3nodding But the unknown poem is quite depressing... but a good poem anyways. whee Did you make these because if you did, they're amazing. If you didn't thats fine too, it still must've taken a long time to find those kinds of poems.


Demona de Morte
Community Member





Sat Feb 23, 2008 @ 05:36pm


I read them all. I'm not sure if I have a favorite though. Some of these poems actually started to hurt. Pm me and I'll explain...


Melfice Elstang
Community Member





Thu Mar 27, 2008 @ 08:31pm


Dude this is the s**t! mind if i make some lyric/song out of these? this stuff is so true, keep writing. i have to many favs to name out of this, or maybe im lazy as hell XD


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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