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This is a scene from a rp me and my friends did. I just wrote it out like this and added some detail to it. I didn't do the entire scene. I like it. How about you? What do you think? Chidori burst into his room, a frantic look upon his face. His eyes widened and filled with tears as he saw his beloved hanging by a rope tied tightly around her neck. She had been hung in the middle of his room, a thin line of blood trickling down from a hole in her forehead and running down the right side of her face before letting another drop of blood land in the small crimson puddle beneath her. Adding to that puddle was the blood that had fallen from the numerous cuts all over he arms and legs, leaving behind light red tinted streaks running down her body. Her eyes were glazed over and blood spilled out of her mouth, which was agape and had collected its fair amount within. “What the hell did they do to her?!” Chidori rushed over to his lover’s body and cut her down. He held her limp form in his arms, slightly rocking her as tears streamed down his face, falling upon hers. There was a small bit of heat coming from her body, but that heat soon depleted, leaving a chill in him that traveled down to his bones. He felt as if his heart had been ripped in two and the love of his life, the only person to teach him how to love and be truly happy, had been taken away, leaving him with nothing. As the tears of sorrow slid down his face, he slowly raised his head to look at the wall to his left, and his fists clenched. On the wall, written in her blood, were the words ‘Have a nice day’.

Posted by: Kityfan2 Sat Feb 23, 2008 @ 06:45pm

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Seelie Amicus Curaie
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Commented on: Sat Feb 23, 2008 @ 08:02pm


	I remember that rp! That part was really sad. Good entry!

Commented on: Tue Feb 26, 2008 @ 02:06am


	warning: this comment is awk because if i say great its sounds like o well if i say its awsome it sounds like i dont give a rats a** when i do ummm if i say soud i sounded like i cried and okay is just a under statement so this was stupendious? OBTW~ i am so dumb i really liked this! ^.^/.

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Commented on: Thu Feb 28, 2008 @ 10:24pm


	thanks you two. ^^ I tried. I'll put others up later.

Commented on: Fri Feb 29, 2008 @ 06:48pm


	Awwww!!! That's so sad! sad

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Commented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 01:56am


	lol have a nice day

Commented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 07:20am


	Wow that really is good. I could picture it as if I was there how well detailed it was. I like the fact that it explained everything that was going on, made the reader understand more and create a picture in their head. Keep Up the Good Work!!

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Commented on: Wed Oct 22, 2008 @ 08:30pm


	An amazing piece of work!! lots of detail and everything! but quite sad and i loved that piece of work so much!!!!! it made me really see the picture of everything so well done!! and keep up the good work!! heart heart heart Currently questing: or Though, don't be a stranger to my profile. Please do visit and comment.

Commented on: Wed Oct 22, 2008 @ 09:33pm


	That is brilliant!!

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Commented on: Tue May 17, 2011 @ 05:39am


	That is quite honestly the creepiest thing Ive ever read in my life, and I read IT by Stephen King. That book is messed up on so many levels it aint even funny.

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